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Bre Henson
2008-03-28
ch 1,
abuseI love it! Lol, so funny!
fragmentofamemory
2008-02-23
ch 1,
abuse“'Stop playing in front of the door, Near! You could hurt somebody,” Mello growled.

“Like me…” Matt muttered pulling a robot model from his side where Mello had tossed him."

XD.

I thought this was a great fan-fic Inu! :) I thought they were in character. ^^
no heart to follow
2008-02-18
ch 1,
abusePoor Mello, no wonder he's so messed up in the future. Really nice, it was funny!
Angel-Danna
2008-02-15
ch 1,
abuselol it was funny and cute :)
Sakura Sango
2008-01-17
ch 1,
abuseOh man it hurts! I've been laughing so hard it hurts. Now if only I can see Mello follow up. Ah man awesome story! I really loved it. And it was so cool readin them as friends.
Yume Sunao
2008-01-15
ch 1,
abuseo3o

Interesting... I kinda like it... ^^
Her Sweetness
2008-01-08
ch 1,
abuseXD Cute. I really liked it, especially the ending what with Mello's "God, I hate my friends." XD So cute. I like it when the three of them are friends in stories. :D! Good job!

Goodbye and goodluck!
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