Huh. Was that meant to be so unrealistically fast-moving? I mean it was a nice storyline, but the characters were a little out of character ("will you be my valentine, Hermione" from a who-knows-how-old Draco)and the plot moved so quickly it was a little hard to follow. So interesting idea, but strange portrayal.

This is the most OC thing I've ever read, and this chapter is only 363 words long.

I like this. It's nice, short, and to the point. Great job, I mean it!

Funny why didnt draco use magic or something and how did he really need that stuff RoR only shows up when you need it...anywayz Hermione and dracoLOL that a funny sight! BTW Great story sweet and short!

Wow. Go Hermione! Although I find it kinda hard to believe that Hermione would have the skill to throw a knife that perfectly. Otherwise, Great job, Katybee!

...Wow. Not sure why, but I think Harry's mad.