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Freedom Creed
2009-01-16 . chapter 1
Can we really use these when we have writer's block? So cool! Thanks! Freedom Creed
poke-the-kitty
2009-01-13 . chapter 1
"Zoro watched his captain sitting on Sunny’s head, kicking himself over a day so long ago when he, Luffy, and Koby had been sitting in a bar after stopping Axehand Morgan, and a girl had smiled and made moon eyes at an unobservant Luffy, and he’d thought to himself ‘I feel sorry for the poor fool who falls in love with this idiot’." - Made me laugh SO hard. Ah Zoro, you fool. XD

"As he looked up at the giant octopus-balloon that was keeping the ship from falling to a watery grave, Luffy wondered if it would really hurt anything if he tried to jump on it." - Such a completly Luffy thought. XD

"Usopp and Nami wisely kept quiet when Sanji secretly served them all venison that night…" - D-did they eat Chopper?!?!?! @.@

Those were my three favorites. Excellent fic M'dear. ^-^
NeoGene
2008-12-16 . chapter 1
Please, put more! Because it's so cute and insightful! I love you and your writing!
Inumaru12
2008-06-21 . chapter 1
aww they were wonderful, but then again your work is always great. ^_^ Hope you write more, especially with some of Brooke in them
tenchibaka
2008-01-24 . chapter 1
^^; it's a shame i'm not a real writer(to poor quality fanwritings and an old barely started vampire novel don't count)so i couldn't possibly use these but the 'mashed potatos' bit was rather good
LuffysAngel
2008-01-13 . chapter 1
Very cute, I hope to see more up soon.
Peaches and Cream
2008-01-11 . chapter 1
These are really clever and inspirational. No wonder you never get writer's block!
catgrl106
2008-01-09 . chapter 1
Wow, a whole bunch of these sound really awesome!
Colhan3000
2008-01-08 . chapter 1
You've givien me some ideas ^_^ You seem to have alot of ideas from the looks of these. You've givien me some ideas for fics relating to Garp and Dragon thats for sure.

There was one line in here that I very much agree with...WHY DO Luffy's crew memebers not notice he's in trouble until he's up to his eyeballs in it? You think by now they would know better XD.

I read your profile and I'm glad to see you got the Coral Reef lemon finish, you were working on that for a while. I can't wait to read it on AFF.N when it passes through its test readers and you put it up.
chihine
2008-01-08 . chapter 1
awesome !! is really great
I liked a lot
Kami Takai
2008-01-08 . chapter 1
Very smart I liked it... It made me go "aw and oh" Very cute at moment and than very funny. It was very One Piecey. I enjoyed it... it reminded me of my unfinshed "chalk story" that I have somewhere on my computer or in my computer desk or somewhere in the mess under my bed but had forrgotten about years ago. Thanks for the reminder. I'll be getting on with me own storys now. Thanks for the fic. I loved every we sentence.
GooglyMooglies
2008-01-08 . chapter 1
cute, i like em
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