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Allybooklover6677
2008-07-30 . chapter 1
Best ending ever!!
pheobe p.
2008-07-17 . chapter 1
hey just found this -- i love how you kept me on the edge of my seat wondering why she was alone and if Kerrigan belonged to Derek.
very moving story
:) pheobe
DemonWitch
2008-03-04 . chapter 1
Aw :D That was cute
True Love Lives Forever
2008-02-26 . chapter 1
That was very sweet and well written. Bravo!
Reverse Psychology
2008-01-12 . chapter 1
Aw! I loved the ending, especially the last line! Nice job =}
degrassichick
2008-01-09 . chapter 1
WOW. That was totally not what I was expecting...but I LOVED IT!
When you were talking about the pairing being obvious at the end, I was like..."Is it going to be something really surprising like Casey and Edwin?" but I wasn't sure. haha

Anyways, I loved this and I'm so happy that you were chosen to write mine :)
Daniixxmarie
2008-01-09 . chapter 1
lol..ha i loved it
jeytonlover
2008-01-09 . chapter 1
I loved it. It was interesting to see where you were taking this. It just kept building and building and then we hit the last part after the end of the song lyrics and I melted into a big pile of Dasey goo.

After reading how wonderful this turned out I feel even worse about what I just posted. Thanks Allie, way to kick a girl when she's down, lol!
Invalid Minds
2008-01-09 . chapter 1
D'aww. I found this so flippin' adorable.

“So, is there a reason that you have two plates set out? Do you have a hot date that you need to tell me about or are you just taking the whole eating for two thing way too literally?”
Perfect.

I loved it. So very much.

Dunno why you think it's bad, Allie. x)

~Jo
Cheetah Eyes
2008-01-08 . chapter 1
This was beautiful. I loved the whole thing.
keriberi2003
2008-01-08 . chapter 1
Aw! The ending totally caught me off guard! I was like, "Wait, what?" lol.
So sweet...The whole thing was just plain adorable.

"...Do you have a hot date that you need to tell me about or are you just taking the whole eating for two thing way too literally?” haha, that line made me smile :) So cute!

I LOVE the song "Time" and I'm so glad you used the lyrics! As soon as I read you're a/n, I put the song on and listened to it as I read. lol.


Another spectacular story. Great Job!
TheBucketWoman
2008-01-08 . chapter 1
For some reason, I was horribly worried that she was gonna turn out to be a widow, so I can't tell you how happy I am to find Derek putting his arms around her middle and being his wiseapple self. Sque!
bsloths
2008-01-08 . chapter 1
Aw, so sweet, especially the last line. It kind of had a melancholy feel in the beginning, and I was afraid they wouldn't be together despite your a/n, but yay!
Infidi
2008-01-08 . chapter 1
I really liked it, good job allie!


princetongirl
2008-01-08 . chapter 1
loved it update soon
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