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| aliaslover14 2008-07-09 ch 17, | abuseThis is great! |
| crazysoccerlady 2008-07-09 ch 17, | abuseHm, I would be heartbroken if you killed Bourne or Nicky. |
| Frust-sheep 2008-07-09 ch 17, | abuseOh awesome chapter again, like always. I so love the interaction between Jason and Nicky. I really can imagine his behaviour and Nicky reaction was so awesome, especially his sideward glance and her kiss to his forehead. I love it. *melt* Oh and Senka, so she got the assassin order. Of course I hope she can not execute the order and complete it. I`m exciting to know where this goes. And Pam is smart as always. I really like her. Her comments are wonderful. Now to your favor. ;) At first I`m really surprised and impressed that you want to know what we like or what we don`t like in your story. Huh, where I see this story going. That`s difficult, but I think Senka will try to complete her orders. Jason and Nicky try to hide or/and to expose like Pam the one, who control the last assassin and handler...so Senka and I don´t know maybe Greg or Rike. I really don`t know. Where would I like to see it going and where would I be heartbroken. Hm, that`s difficult, too. *lol* At first I think the direction and the plot are brilliant. So above, I think this would be cool. And ok, I`m a huge hopeless Nicky and Jason shipper. *lol* So I would love, if they would be get together of course. *hinthint* ;) *lol* And if they can solve their past and their relationship. And of course I hope that Senka can`t complete her order and that she eventually can live her own life again. Also I hope Pam get her respect and satisfaction. I hope I could help you a little bit. :) But it is your story and you can of course write what you want etc. :) PS: Sorry, for my bad english and please update ASAP. I so can`t wait for more and to know, if Jason likes the dessert. *lol* |
| Frust-sheep 2008-07-04 ch 16, | abuseOh this is so exciting jennamc. :) I love it and loved especially that line: “So you thought you’d do the assassin a favor and make it easier by pairing Nicky and me up together? You figured you’d save them a trip?” That was awesome.*lol* I really like your humor and I can`t wait to know what happens next. :D I hope Jason can comfort Nicky. |
| Sarah Rochester 2008-07-04 ch 16, | abuseLOVE IT! I saw that this was updated when I went to the Bourne Identity/Supremacy index page and I was excited! Another great chapter and I love how you weave OCs in with the other characters. BRAVO! |
| Frust-sheep 2008-06-23 ch 15, | abuseOh no no this does NOT suck. His dream was so real. Excellent writing jennamc. I loved the interaction between Jason and Nicky of course. It was really sweet. Oh and can I have some tea, too? Please. *lol* ;) Oh and I really love that Pam is so smart. She has almost always the right answers. You portrayed her very good again. Please update soon. I can`t wait for more and I`m really excited to know what the dream means. :) |
| Sarah Rochester 2008-06-18 ch 15, | abuseFabulous and surprising as usual! I cannot want to see what you end up doing with this story :) |
| texamich 2008-06-13 ch 15, | abuseI have so much admiration for your ability to uphold your tone, characterizations and plotlines in this length of story. Thanks for another compelling chapter. |
| Sarah Rochester 2008-06-08 ch 14, | abuseMORE MORE MORE!! I love complex stories. It makes me want to go back and re-read it. |
| Frust-sheep 2008-05-12 ch 14, | abuseOh great update jennamc. :) It`s so exciting. I`m glad, that Nicky is not alone now. Great conversation between Paz and Pam. I wonder, which mission Senka have to do and what happens next. Please update soon. :) |
| texamich 2008-05-08 ch 14, | abuseYou really have a sharp sense of the genre; even these expository chapters crackle with action. I'm really enjoying it. Love Landy's sharpmness, dominance, detail, and precision: "You can narrow down that description..." Keep 'em coming... |
| Frust-sheep 2008-04-15 ch 13, | abuseYes, yes a update. :D Huh, I think Senka and Paz are not friends - at all events not anymore. *lol* I wonder what Paz, but especially Senka have in mind. And Pam rocks the building. That`s really cool. The lady is just so smart. I really liked her conversation with Martin. *lol* Can`t wait for Nicky`s and Jason encounter. :D Please update soon again. PS: I hope Toro makes good coffee. *lol* |
| Frust-sheep 2008-04-01 ch 12, | abuseOh yes an update. :D *clap* Nicky`s fear is very believable and you described it very realistic. Awesome. :D And the conversation between her and Jason was funny. *lol* But I`m very glad that he is there for her. I`m really excited to know what happens, if they meet again. :D And I`m excited to know what Pam has in mind. Anyway wonderful chapter again jennamc. I really can`t wait for more...so please update soon. :) Please. :) |
| gioia-gg 2008-03-31 ch 12, | abuseamazing story! |
| gioia-gg 2008-03-26 ch 11, | abuse“You lied, yes. I lie too. Those shoes you wear… they’re ugly.” I gave a loud laugh out with this line. Also like Jason's comment about about her hair at the phone. That was a very good update to a very nice story. Hope that you'll update soon, I'm enjoying your story immensily. |