Cute story, very well written! Good work!

A very nice fic. We don't see enough Charlione!

Pity you didn't include an account of the Grangers seeing that their little girl worked with fire breathing dinosaurs...

You’re right; there aren’t enough stories of Charlie and Hermione. BUT this one is AMAZING. I loved it :D

That was brilliant. I love Hermione/Charlie stories, and this one is one of the best by far. Great job.

Epilogue or Sequel? I think so!

No, seriously, I really liked this!

Aw! I loved this story, loved the ending! It was so sweet! Any chance of a sequel?! :D

Hope you write more stories soon I loved this one!!

That was such a fantastic story :)

wow, i can't believe its actually over! it was such a great story, i really loved it.

the ending was really good too, i'm glad that you didn't do the whole "charlie and herione had 16 kids and lived happily ever after" things in the final chapter. (if one is going to do that, they should make it an epilouge, actually, one shouldn't do those at all. they're so boring.) but i liked how you left it at their wedding with just enough insight to know sort of what's going to happen to them, but not enough where there's no room for interpretation.

and i really liked how you ended it with "thank god sometimes life doesn't turn out how you plan" that was a really great line to tie into the story.

there were a few very minor spelling/grammar errors, (but hey, who doesn't have those once and a while, and they didn't make reading difficult or anything, so no harm, no foul i guess) but overall, the entire story was a really great piece of writing. kudos!

~Stars

omg, what a cute fic *-*
i loved it, congrats!

This is such a great story...its a squee kind of fic (you know, you read it and it makes you want to go SQUE!!) hehehehe...I hope there will be at least an epilogue, if not an out right sequel. I look forward to reading more of your stories, if they are the same quality as this one!!

update soon can't wait what happens next

Nekked w0t!

Lol - This story get similtaneously funnier and cuter chapter by chapter - :)

Aw. awesome chapter! I can't wait for the wedding! Post more soon please!

hooray! :)

aww...finally! that was a sweet chapter. kudos!

~StarsInTheSky123