aw <3

This is one of the best second-life fic, suicide fic, and AkuRoku I have ever read! It was beautiful in every sense and I'm so hapy for Roxas and Axel(both of them got their dream ^^). I wish there was another chapter from Cloud's view of how he got together with Leon(I'm assuming Roxas' oldest brother is Cloud and he ran off with Leon, sorry if I'm wrong!)!
Thankyou for such a great fic! Keep up the good work!

FUCK. That was beautiful. Just wonderful; the characterization was great and the way you ended it was perfect.

This is the funniest fic about suicide I've ever read. That being said, you do a beautiful job addressing such a grim subject with both the seriousness it deserves, and enough levity to make it bearable. I love the richness of the characters, and the way this fic drags you through the worst moments of their lives and into the best.

This story was so beautiful... the way you described everything, and the little 'speeches' from Axel ad Roxas were amazing. I loved the insert of Roxas running up the building (good little mental imagary, lol) yeah... this review is coming out all kinds of wrong, but this story was amazing, and I honestly loved reading it.

So... thankyou?

Jaffz
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that was amazing. so well written and so damn sweet. i love roxasxaxel and this just made my day. the ending was so romantic and dramatic. i really ,really liked this.

This was absolutely beautiful. You definitely had me crying by the end of this. And I love the letter at the end. A brillant story that's both touching and humorous.

I'm sure this makes me a super!freak, but I love failed suiced stories...they always make my day.

I'm so silly.

Anyway (I always get so random whenever I'm writing a review...what's up with that?) I absolutely love this story; I laughed, I cried, I got angry at myself for laughing at stuff I shouldn't have been laughing at. Wonderful story, very well written. (Unlike this review).

Love,
The Cake Fairy

Wow, the whole premises is like something out of a somewhat cliched romance novel, and yet somehow manages to work so well with these two. The emptiness, the fulfillment, the ultimate ending that's just the right blend of humour and sweetness (and a dash of stupidity) are all very awesomely done.

Oh, that last line was SO from Axel. Sigh~~ that was beautiful. :D~ They're fulfilling the things they always wanted! :) I almost cried when they fought.. XD. I love this fic in so many ways. Yay for a realistic, and totally unique AxelxRoxas!

Wow. This is really, really amazing. I've known people who have attempted or thought about suicide and, just ... every single one of them ought to read this. You've made a wonderful, funny, poignant story out of a completely serious topic. I love it.

Thank you so much for sharing!

This fic touched me in so many ways.. -claps- wonderful job :)

--AMLF

Woah. This is so intense. I kind of want to cry, but I don't think it's quite appropriate. But wow. I honestly think this is one of my favorite stories, and I'm so happy I stumbled upon it. Wow. Thank you so much for writing this. I definitely needed this. It gives me something to think about. Wow...

My God...that was just...incredibly beautiful - in a tragic way. I've never read a story quite so brutally human, and honest such as this. [And I've read a lot.] This fic really hits some common emotions regarding people hearts; everyone is searching for their other half, it's just the matter of finding it.

I will admit, part of me was tempted to scroll down to the end and find out whether they really jumped or not, but I couldn't bring myself to do it. The writing was just that good. Plus, I was a bit scared to find out either way; if they did jump, I would've been attracted to the tragedy it provoked, however, since they didn't I was drawn towards the hope it displayed.

Out of every fanfiction I've ever read here on FFN, this was got to be one of my all-time favorites.

You're a wonderful writer. Really.

~GK

This is...is there a word for something that's better then awesome, fantastic, and amazing put together? This is that x10. This made me horribly depressed in some parts and laughing out loud in others. I have to say, the note they wrote was hilarious and so like them. All in all? 11/10.