 Sora G. Strife 2008-07-31 . chapter 1Wow! That's pretty new. I haven't seen this before. Thank you for giving me a little more joy in my life. Thank you! |
 IVIaedhros 2008-07-02 . chapter 1Interesting plot idea...enjoyed it. |
 Silverdancer 2008-03-24 . chapter 1AH.
GAVE ME CHILLS. |
 Cedarville 2008-03-04 . chapter 1This was a very touching story although I'm not a big fan of the pairing, I must admit. Still, you made this a believable and 'cool', for lack of a better word, story. The ending was especially nice.
-Cedar |
 imaginedreams22 2008-02-06 . chapter 1it touched my heart |
 Pied Flycatcher 2008-01-13 . chapter 1What a lovely idea, and it makes sense too. I liked the description of the Lifestream; I think you captured the way it works very well. There are a few typos - you mix up 'it's' and 'its' a lot. It's is short for 'it is', its is the possessive. And there are a couple of other word mix-ups, like 'straights' instead of straits, but those are only minor things really. |
 Alantie Mistaniu 2008-01-10 . chapter 1Lovelovelove! This idea was absolutely FABULOUS!! I practically squealed when they were summoned- soo awesome! This was such a beautiful blend of angst and romance, and I just adored it, my dear. Wonderful work! |
 See No Dum-Dums 2008-01-10 . chapter 1Oh, of course! Materia are the condensed knowledge of the Cetra! Smart Cloud!
Lolz, I liked this one! A Clorith that didn't need much fluff - and a Clorith with a bizarre happy ending too! Such a cool summon materia! (Wow, you do think a lot on your work, no?) I am definitely adding this to the faves list.
Curious, though... did I just see a Sephiroth incarnation and a Vincent Valentine? But then, whether they are or not, it's your fic, not mine. So... there. |
 nesza 2008-01-10 . chapter 1wow. that was beautiful! i love the idea of Cloud and Aeris becoming GF's and their spirits being together in the materia. The writing was wonderful! keep writing! ^_^ |
 sessystalker 2008-01-09 . chapter 1Aw, that was an adorable story, and well-written, too! The idea of them becoming materia together was an awesomely romantic touch. :3 |
 Lucedeoangel 2008-01-09 . chapter 1Oh, that was sweet. The whole thought of them being togther in materia.
You know something? It's good your sappy. You show it in your writing.
Tis illwaitforever1 from CxA BTW. |