Great story so far .
Update A.S.A.P.!

i loved this fic, it ws a amazing story line. please update soon, i cant wait to hear what happens next!!

LG

Wow I love this story. Poor Mattie
Please update more soon.

loved it!

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this is good

this is good

Omg what's going to happen??

You do not know how glad I am that you updated! I was going to send you a PM begging you to update LOL.

I loved this chapter! It was so awesome. I actually thought she had died and im like how is this story going to continue. I can tell you im so glad she didn't die LOL. Poor Tony, Lucas and especially Jack. I feel really bad for them. I can't wait to see where you go with this.

Please, Please Update again soon. Thank You.

great keep it up hope you have anothere chapter up soon!

plez plez continue i like it alot u shud have rachel help her from rape bcuz in the show rachel was a rape vic n she noes how to deal with it that if u have mattie survive of course

i like the couple mattie and jack are my favourites on h&a please update soon

hey
i loved your story
u should make some more.

its good and everything but i can definetley tell that you're american cos australias emergencey phone number is 0 not 911 and we say mum not mom.
just some tips

okay not to sound mean or anything but one thing i dont care where in the world you live but home and away is set in AUSTRALIA not America so if your going to put in someone ringing an emergency number dont put 911 its 0 as in triple zero get it right if your gonna write it. Okay my rants nearly over, but it needed to be said! i'm sick of asking little kids in Australia what number do you ring if theres an emergency and what do they answer with 911 why coz they watch to much american tv shows! that number isn't gonna do them anygood if mummy collapses and she wont wake up, why hello wrong country!

Oh no don't die mattie, I love this fic, hope you are going to keep writing, please, thanks.