great story

Basically, you're incredible. That was just...an experience. I think you portrayed them extremely well, and just...wow. -gives cookies-

Oh god, my heart broke to a million pieces over and over while reading this. I love your characterization of Karen (Bill, too). I think it's spot on. And the need, the desperation of needing the person you're in love with... You captured that totally and completely. Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant.

Wow. What an amazing story, you portray these two perfectly. This is how I'd write them if I could :) More please!

This is amazing. Simple but so heartfelt. Some parts like the end almost hurt too much to read. Great, great job. I love it.

I love this! It's beautifully written and just gut-wrenching. Thanks for posting :)

Wow, amazing. Another brilliant story. I hope there is more where that came from! I really love it. How you write Bill and Karen together is absolutely amazing. I like how you've broken it up in segments, each segment a new feeling, another place. I like how there were some humorous parts in the story to break up the seriousness of it all. Thanks for posting this!

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I have always been a fan of your writing-this was beautiful! Thank you for posting!

Wow! Incredible story, as yours always are! I absolutely loved all of the little vignettes that all added up. It was a very interesting take on their relationship. I also like how you jumped around in time a bit, too. It's almost like it goes backwards in time, or something. Very cool, and I loved it! I hope you write more soon!

Ach. Gorgeous and heartbreaking and just... ach. You've made my evening.

This was a really good story! You did an great job of keeping them both in character and I liked how it was a bunch of short segments but also wrapped it all together very nicely. Awesome job!