Very well done, as usual! I can hear Edward's voice clearly in this piece, it is very in character. One question - would reading Bella's thoughts be somewhere on one of his lists? Maybe that would be a different list...

I really like that Edward thinks of Bella in everything he does, including homework. She is the center of his world, just as he is hers.

Lovely!

blondie

oh wow this is really cool!

something quite unusual but really nice!

SM

This was great! I'm definetly looking foward to reading the rest!

You are a fantastic author. Actually, fantastic isn't good enough. Stupendous, amazing, superlative, masterful! I've read some of your other stories and they are all written in such a REFRESHING way that it's like drinking cold, clean water after years of cheap soda. I look forward to your next update and hope that it's very soon!

o, really good!

please update soon, if you take too long, i may loose interest and you don't want that, do you?

good story

Very cute. Particularly liked how he listed making love to Bella twice. Too funny. Teaching her to run was a cute one too:)

wow. thats all i can say. wow. its amazing...wow...

That was really sweet...

Great! Got to love our Edward, Mr. "Simply Thinks Too Darn Much". Can't wait to see what you have Bella and Jacob conjure up.

Beautiful, so Edward. Great job, continue soon. :]

I love that 'Make love to Bella.' Twice. Haha.. :) That's Edward for you.

Ahhmazing story!

Crimson Droplets

Haha i loved it! Very true to Edward!

update update update!

I like it so far update soon. XD

wow. that was good and a little...weird but i liked it