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Magali
2008-08-14
ch 27,
abuseOh, boy, this isn't good. The part where Courtney is talking to the phone to that guy (Kal Langley?). Maria is the obtacle, now. I fear what she will do. Not kill her, it would be too suspicious, but Courtney will do something.

The clever thing would be to make an allee out of Maria but I doubt that Courtney will go the clever way.
Dcrawford84
2008-08-10
ch 27,
abuseKeep Zan-Max because I think he is good for your story because I
think Zan-Max is more proactive in more situations than the regular Max is and I like the you bring the t.v. show and now the books into your story. ps your a great writer. thanks Dcrawford84
Magali
2008-08-10
ch 26,
abuseMichael and Maria have realized that Max isn't Max anymore. But will Michael be able to resist his alien side, whether it's artificially waken up or naturally? Although I doubt they would fall into Nacedo's trap if they get their original personalities back. As Zan, Max is confident and doesn't need a simple guard like Nacedo.
Trude
2008-08-04
ch 26,
abuseloved the grilling experiment LOL
slimshadyzlady
2008-08-03
ch 26,
abusei don't really have a comment this one i did have a question. why is this chapter called face to face? i'm sure its something simple but i'm an overthinker and i'm just not seeing it.
DianeEvansReplic
2008-07-23
ch 24, anon.
abusei started to read this ff but if i can be honest i don't know if i like it or not. You stated that it's CC but it doesn't seem completely CC for me especially for M&M and M&L (is Max drugged or what? it's AU and i understand the alien side thing but he's totally out of character) since you wrote UC too i hope that this isn't one of those stories that are fake CC or that are CC only in the end without a real believable developing. this wouldn't be the first one like that.
slimshadyzlady
2008-07-21
ch 24,
abusei can't believe i forgot to read this yesterday. i'm usually ready, just waiting to read it but i didn't remember. i don't have alot to say about this cuz there wasn't that much going on. i mean i'm glad max or whoever he is let isabel know he's not really mad at her anymore. too bad it took isabel getting attacked for him to say it. everything i read that has anything to do with liz makes me want to cry. its like you can't help but feel bad for her, i couldn't stay in that. i would have had to go somewhere to get my head right, away from all of them.
Magali
2008-07-21
ch 24,
abuseMax was very king like in this part. Much more Zan than Max, in my opinion. And Michael... Isabel was all right but he was too worried about her. I wonder why.

I liked the Liz-Alex part. It was so true, that they didn't have fun anymore. A pity.
Magali
2008-07-14
ch 23,
abuseWell, that's called killing two birds with one stone. Nicolas wants to trap the aliens AND to check out if Courtney is as loyal as she pretends.

And is it me or is Nacedo huge on getting rid of Maria in Michael's life? And he appears to be pro-Isabel, too.
Trude
2008-07-08
ch 22,
abusefantastic update
slimshadyzlady
2008-07-08
ch 22,
abuseit just seems like it keeps getting worse everytime i read this story. i'm sure that's how you wanted it to be but sometimes its a little too much drama. that doesn't change the fact that i can't stop reading it though. i mean i'll just be sitting around on sunday waiting for the add b/c i don't go to church.
Magali
2008-07-07
ch 22,
abuseHmm, it looks like Michael remembers instinctively Courtney but something inside him just doesn't aknowledge it. It makes me wonder why he was so willing to trust her, when we know that on Antar, he had been betrayed by two women.
Magali
2008-06-30
ch 21,
abuseOuah, that's so sad. Michael and Maria are drifting away, slowly but surely. Max, at least, has a good explanation, an alien one, explaining his behavior and I really don't believe that he'll stay Zan once he goes back to being Max. But Michael... he chooses to behave like that, it's worse.

It's surprising how Michael easily Michael can forget about Nacedo killing Sean, Amy's husband, just to take his form. He killed an innocent when he could have avoided that. Maria has been used and abused but Michael just forgets about that or doesn't deem it important in the grand scheme of things.
slimshadyzlady
2008-06-30
ch 21,
abusei feel so bad for liz right now. i thought maria had it bad with michael but at least he'll acknowledge her. i would have been crying already if that was me b/c i'm very emotional. i hope there isn't any of that drama with the flashes between tess and max or whatever he's called right now.
Trude
2008-06-29
ch 21, anon.
abuseawesome update
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