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a-alexiel 2008-07-23 ch 7,	abuseOMG his blocking because of love is so romanntic! ^^ And I love the role of Fran, your description. And this sentence: "What a fool a woman would be to not fight for this man? He was everything that should be a man. Handsome, strong, loyal and honourable, romantic….he was man"=> You're perfectly right, 10 times right ^^ And your ending is very funny ^^ "Happy birthday, your highness" XD
a-alexiel 2008-07-23 ch 6,	abuse“I…love her. Dammit….Balthier….I….I love her.” Alex flings her arms up Alleuilla! The more difficultis done! “You fight well, but you have a lot to learn. It’s not always about the kill. Killing for the sake of it, is never right. Know your enemies…know their purpose and your own and the fight will be righteous.” “Blah blah blah.”=> LOL!
a-alexiel 2008-07-23 ch 5,	abuse“Hey Basch….” Vaan’s voice squeaked in his ear. “Do you think this Mirror Mail makes me look fat?” LOL!
a-alexiel 2008-07-23 ch 4,	abuseOMG Balthier is a pervert but a genius XD This sentence cracked me up: "He would be happy for her. He would be extremely happy for her. Basch’s hand reached out for his ale and contemplated Ashe finally remarrying. He had thought of this, many times in the past and Basch hated himself for it. The angst and grief of knowing that he would never, could never, be the one to kiss her, to hold her or make love to her….it hurt him every day. But Ashe needed to be happy. It was all that mattered." It's so cute cry
a-alexiel 2008-07-23 ch 3,	abuseIt's cool I learned romantic terms like "enamoured""besotted…”“Infatuated" "Smitten" "in love with” ^^ My god, Basch snapped people? What will he do when she will shops with Balthier? I can't wait reading the next chapter...
a-alexiel 2008-07-23 ch 2,	abuse“Ah…this is so sweet.” said the shop lady. “Is this your daughter?” Basch had never ran so quickly in his life. That's my fav part! XD Basch/Penelo's fans must be very very very irritated!
a-alexiel 2008-07-23 ch 1,	abuseI prefer review your story chater by chapter because there are a lot of extracts that I find awesome! I love your beginning. In this chapter, "Clang clang, clunk….screech. That was the sound of discomfort from Basch’s armour. Larsa already imagined the look of horror on the older man’s face. Shopping was not for him." and all the extracts related to the armour are so well found and funny! The next chapter will be very interesting ^^
Lucas McDrake 2008-07-15 ch 8,	abuseAww! I love-no-adore this fanfic! This IS the best fanfic I've ever read-and that will never change! I hope to see more fanfics like this soon!
Lucas McDrake 2008-07-15 ch 7,	abuseHow funny, inappropriate, and sweet at the same time! I love it! (and yet...was it nessassary to make Basch miss out on the party?)
Lucas McDrake 2008-07-15 ch 6,	abuseHow funny, and confusing at the same time. Would you care to tell me of that "Nabradian folklore", and why they had to bless their weapons, kill the male, and get one thing from them?
Lucas McDrake 2008-07-15 ch 5,	abuse"Does my bum look big?" "Does it fit?" "What do you think?" "Shall I go for a different style?" "Do you think they have the bag and shoes to match?"...No thank you. * "Do you think this Mirror Mail makes me look fat?" That made me laugh so hard...oh, how priceless the moments are! I just loved this chappie so much!
Lucas McDrake 2008-07-15 ch 4,	abuseOh...now the improperity begins. Still, I'm rooting for this story-it's one of the best I've read so far! Good work!
Lucas McDrake 2008-07-15 ch 3,	abuseOh no. Here we go again.
Lucas McDrake 2008-07-15 ch 2,	abusehe he he he! How funny! I can't wait 'til Basch (finally) gives in!
Lucas McDrake 2008-07-15 ch 1,	abuseI love how you describe...well...everything! How Basch is trying to distance himself from Ashe, how Ashe misses him just as dearly as he does her...and, my favorite, how Larsa is puzzled for no scratches on the floor! Keep going! P.S.-Very not improper, unlike your other stories! Keep it up!

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