I liked it! I really loved the ending!
~Crystal

What an adorable story. You worked everything in there perfectly.

After reading your profile, I cannot express how happy I am to know I'm not the only mom in her 30's into LWD. Keep up the great stories. I can't wait to read more.

clever, very clever, and cute
sorry i didnt get to reviewing this before, i clicked on it and my computer shut down and then i forgot all about it as i searched for my last chapter that i had worked on and told my guy that he is to stay away from my computer since he is a curse and almost always does soemthing to my computer... i call it Trevor-itis.. lol, i told him that i have an anti-virus which is me saying no, you cant go on my computer, and therefore protects my computer, lol, i know, i'm messed up, but on with the show, hope you write more in everything and inspire the great daseyness in all of us, :P

Are you kidding me?! How can you not be proud of this fic!?! It was SO good! I loved it! =)

Good job, I really liked it.

I like it very much! I thought it was great! (And at least you finished. I'm still frantically trying to finish mine!) Thank you so much for writing this!

-Tarryn

“and it’s the same Derek that upon seeing you come out of my house in your new bikini stumbled into my pool, fully clothed.”
ROFL. Love it.

I loved the Clueless reference, even though I've never seen it. xD I've heard a lot about it, though. I should probably watch it.

Feel good Derek moment! xD

I dunno what you're talking about, this was amazing. I loved it! Don't be so hard on yourself.

~Jo

Hey now, we got plenty. This was great. And I loved the "built like a rock" line. Classic.

Good job!

BTW, did you see OTH on Tuesday?

i liked this story very cute and funny at the same time. ^^

I really liked it! It had a sweetness to it that rivals that of a box of chocolate. haha. cheesy. To be honest I do think it wasn't your best story, but it was no where near as bad as you made it out to be. I truly enjoyed it!

That was great.I Loved it...Good Job write more soon

lisa1022

That was not bad. Not at all bad. True, it wasn't as phenomenal as some of your others, but still, it was very good.

I liked the light-hearted humor, and the jealous Derek. Always fun. Always. You handled the Casey-Derek-Noel triangle well, in a way that didn't overdo anything in particular. Nice use of chocolate-I swear, it cures everything.

Overall, excellent job. So, stop putting yourself down to earn reviews. Yeah, I know what you're doing: I've already used that trick ;)

I loved this!
and I loved that you used a quote from my favorite movie of all time!
I love all of your stories, can't wait for more.

aww, that was so sweet. go Dasey! lol

Luv ya
Tara
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i agree with everyone else, you are an awesome writer! keep it up! :)