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| BrookeGreene 2008-01-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseI'm assuming you didn't get my second reveiw of this, I accidentally closed the window. I have to apologise for my first reveiw, it wasn't very nice. I was tired because I had only gotten 3 1/2 hours of sleep the night before (actually that's the same amount I got last night too...), I needed a shower and I had just gotten over this spell of depression I'd been having, and this threw me right back in. It wasn't that I didn't like the story, because I did, I just shouldn't have read it at that particular moment. I'm sorry I took that out on you. |
| Hamlets-pirate 2008-01-12 ch 1, | abuseOkay. That was... random. And sad as Hell. Damn you. Plus now I REALLY can't eat eggs. Thanks! why won't TDCSI shut up about your brother? |
| 9ud9ir190ne6ad 2008-01-11 ch 1, | abuseThat was brillant, it was little different from your usual stuff, but even so i thought it was good. :D |
| regan666 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abusewow that was complete and utter randomness...and i lurrved it! that was fantastic, there should be more completely mad ramblings like that...but trust you to be the one to write it. well congrats it was extremely well written, and very funny! go you! |
| The Queen of Sin 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuseokay, I may forgive you for doing a CD now...this is rather awesome!...made me giggle...and then whine when you said about the dead squirrels...I have a friend who is a squirrel...and a 3 year old crying Grissom sounds like THE cutest thing on the plannet! .. ... ... and now my gf is gunna kill me for reading this and not beta'ing...thanks dude... |
| BrookeGreene 2008-01-09 ch 1, | abuseUh... well, that took away the nice, light mood I was in from reading the worst fanfiction in the history of everything and threw me right back into depressed-ville. Thanks... It wasn't too religious though, I went more religious in my fic with his dream an all (I cringe when I read that part). I suppose I could say something about it being good, but I'm too busy being pissed about the CD. And you were right, I so wouldn't have clicked on it right then if I knew. I suppose I would've read it later, but not today. And seriously, if you don't go read my new (not so new anymore) fic soon I will kill you, or more likely just not review any of your stuff until you do. G'night. |
| inonolimits00 2008-01-09 ch 1, | abuseYeah what can i say Mr spoon... another fantastic story... its almost scary how goddamn fantastic this is... just wow ... i love how this whole thing was written... had such a great effect and i have to say your right if you put CD in the summary i wouldnt have read it but that is just cause im overly emotional :D never let go of your muse cause i think that this is strangly (strange as in ive never eread one like it) one of the best stories ive ever read on fanfic ;] ... A/N it didnt come off "soap-boxy" it was just spudsy enough ... and it didnt come off as religious either ... i understaand what you were trying to get at :D okay PS i dont know what happened caus ei think im on your author alert cause a few months ago ai went thro like all of your stories but i didnt get notified, just think i could have not gotten to read this story WHAT A TRAGEDY THAT WOULD BE! wow IM A POEM AND I DONT EVEN KNOW IT ... PSS yeah sorry bout all the elipses i dont know i guess im just in a trailing off mood...yeah... ~~;]~ZOEY~;]~ AKA NONO |
| AngelEddison 2008-01-09 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely loved it. LOVED it. The part about Grissom buying the dog had me laughing so hard. Loved it. Loved it. Loved it. |
| CJS-DEPPendent 2008-01-09 ch 1, | abuseTHAT WAS EXCELLENT!(and I don't mean that in the "I'm just reviewing 'coz she asked be to" way) It really as a fantastic story, it had a little bit of everything that makes a good story, but especially had that special kind of humor that you only find in your sotries that has the power to make me laugh out loud at midnight on a wednesday when all I wanted to do was sleep. Please write some more stories soon, you're an AMAZING writer and I truly enjoy reading your stuff! |
| TDCSI 2008-01-09 ch 1, | abuseHell yeah I'll review, and you know it. This story is the shit and of course like many of your past works where you felt so-so on it, this one takes the cake. I can't make a sarcastic reivew about it, but like I said it gives that ooh it's funny, then it's like, no wait, that's not so funny but it's not cry your eyes out either. BRILLIANT PS. Thou art leave a shitty review for this, and I will hunt you down and kill you. My dogs enjoy blood. |
| grissomlove 2008-01-09 ch 1, | abuseJess, That was beauitful. It makes you think back on your life experiences and wonder, did I really do that? I liked how you took bits and pieces of Gil's life and made them almost real. It was NOT soap=boxy, little fwy it made me remember kissing my first boyfriend[blushing here] and hoping you don't get caught by your dad or worse, yor brother, I reallt liked the part when she twirled her finger in the air, and sais about the rules,sometimes they stink, don't you think? hope to read more on this one. |
| Blaspheme 2008-01-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseThough I am not about to say it is something great, or very good, I do have to say that this is not as thoroughly disappointing as the rest of your stories have been. You did fall off when you had Grissom in the closet with that waitress, but that was absolutely a ridiculous thing to even think about having in this. I doubt it, but perhaps you can keep up with doing things somewhat like this. Maybe then you'll evolve and you'll no longer shock us with monstrosities. |
| CSIGeekFan 2008-01-09 ch 1, | abuseWow and great job. It's sad, but reflective. Wow. |
| grissom4 2008-01-09 ch 1, anon. | abusethe story was different, i enjoyed reading it. it was also sad. |
| Invisible Evidence 2008-01-09 ch 1, | abuseJess? Apologising? no way! (and btw; I didn't spell apologise wrong, I'm a foreigner, well done) But this was really good and really sad :( but more good than sad, I liked it and that waitress kinda sounds whoreish like the blonde co-worker |