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really great writing, your descriptive words were perfect.

I adore you. X3 You write such beautiful angst and the way you flow with the words of description made me want to write. XD

It's so beautiful. Really.

—your heart was breaking, shattering into millions of fragments, all so sharp and pointed you daren’t touch them, for fear of cutting yourself—he smiles weakly, the corners of his azure eyes crinkling—

Oh, Hinata-chan. *collapses in tears*

The details. Man, this is so beautiful. The way you put the words into such fluidity. X3 OMG. I LOVE IT SO MUCH. XD

AND YES, SHALL KILL SASUKE AFTER HE IMPREGNATES SAKURA.

So, Sasuke killed Naruto? ...I can see that happening...

(And, yes, it seems as if you are in a character-killing roll...now I'm wary of any sasusaku stories...they migh have death too...)

That was really nice, though. I liked it better than 'One Week' (lovely descriptions, by the way. maybe a tad bit overdone, but lovely nevertheless.)

It's sort of sad that naru-kun noticed hina-chan when he was dying, but at least he noticed her.

...And, ss long as you don't get rid of the stories, go ahead and do whatever.