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fetherhd
2009-12-01 . chapter 7
I so hope you are going to finish this?
St.st.stutter
2009-09-08 . chapter 7
dimples ftw. <3
this entire story is addictive. no kidding. your portrayl of Yuffie is perfect, and I shall now go and whine and sniffle over my lack of meaningful Yuffieness.
You, dear writer, are BRILLIANT.
and i am quite sad to see the "Updated: 04-30-09"
not to squeak a familiar song, but i eagerly await your next installment. <3
Latte
KaseiC
2009-08-17 . chapter 7
Beautiful and real and true. I have minimal knowledge of FFVII but I'm SO glad I clicked open this fic. I wish, though, that I had more than a measly 5 chapters (or 7) to read. I would've stayed up the entire night for this. Much love, and please update soon.
mom calling
2009-08-07 . chapter 7
Marilena, Found this in someone's favorite list and I am very impressed. A lucky find for me because you're not on my usual fan fic trails. I spent all my working life in healthcare, and rehab was one of my favorite places for a long while. After I retired I kept my emotional "hand" in by spiritual work in a large hospital, and listened to a lot of Yuffie-types... So this is not new stuff to me. I think you've done a good job of portraying a young person's experience with a spinal injury and I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this. You've been working on these 7 installments for a while and that makes me a bit nervous because this is about when a lot of authors loose control of their story, or real life gets in the way...This is a great story with a lot yet to tell--I hope you are able to get us to a point where Yuffie sees some hope for her life to have meaning to her, Vincent, and whomever else she's with...so far, she only knows that she's going down, and will take her caregiver down with her... That's Vincent, I'm presuming, and I don't see him going down. I think he'll help her see that her journey is still an interesting one, just not the one she planned and dreamed of... mom calling
ChigiriHateshinai
2009-08-02 . chapter 7
Love it! The idea that vincent has dimples is hilarious! Please update soon!
always-kh
2009-07-11 . chapter 7
another good chapter. i'm glad she has at least minimal use of her fingers then.
always-kh
2009-07-11 . chapter 5
good job with that and yeah it would make sense for teefa to look after her but with a kid of her own on the way yeah that wouldn't happen.
always-kh
2009-07-11 . chapter 4
good chapter you have me crying with it. amazing writing and everyone seems so IC.
always-kh
2009-07-11 . chapter 3
lord wow i can understand why she'd be in denial tho. so depressing...
always-kh
2009-07-11 . chapter 2
at the neck?! gawd that sux i guess it would explain why vincent was feeding her. i was wondering how she got injured thank goodness she didn't kill anybody she doesn't need to get any more vincent like cuz i'm sure she was depressive abt that.
always-kh
2009-07-11 . chapter 1
hmm amusing and yuffie seems very IC so she's the one in the wheelchair?
The Panster
2009-07-02 . chapter 7
It's late, way past my bedtime and here I am reading a Yuffentine? No. Pan hasn't gone insane. You mentioned once or twice around the forums that you had a personal connection to this story and lying in bed tonight I think I figured out that connection. I hope so anyway, or I'll look very stupid.
So unable to sleep I decided to get up and give this story a go. Yuffentine isn't my cup of tea but I figured there must be something in this story I'll like, after all Marilena wrote it.

I was wrong.

There wasn't a single thing I liked in this story.

There were a million.

I wasn't sure what to expect when I read the summary and opened this story but what I got was definitely something special that easily transcends pairing wars (Lol)

The dynamic in your story is amazing. I have no idea how you are able to balance humor with pain so seamlessly. Well I think I do but to be able to put that to words is something I haven't seen very often. It's like life, bittersweet at every moment.

Every time I read your stories I feel so inadequate for a moment then I stop caring and realize I have wonderful stories like this to read and I stop feeling so small in that little thing I call talent.

Anyway I'm rambling now and it's 1AM. I just had to read this and let you know what I think.

And I think this is one of the best stories I've read so far on this site. It really and truly caught me off guard. Not that I was expecting anything less than great from you it's just I'm so used to reading the pure silly Mari with fun stories. It's a change to get such a down to earth story that isn't all giggles and facepalms. It's real. I like that.

Your friend, Panny

PS please forgive any errors. I have a strict no spellcheck/proof reading after midnight rule :P
Chocoborider92
2009-07-01 . chapter 7
This is absolutely wonderful. The last part of chap. 5 was wonderful. Gosh, I feel soo sorry for yuffie! This is a wonderful story, please keep up the terrific work.
MadeInHolland
2009-06-23 . chapter 7
I love it already. The concept is fantastic, I can't wait to find out how this story devolopes further. Please keep on writing :)
Starwarrior536
2009-06-04 . chapter 3
Yuffie never seems to be depressed about anything, does she? Wonderful.
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