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| celticfox 2008-05-09 ch 2,  | abuse'Gasped shockingly'? That doesn't seem quite right... |
| celticfox 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuseInteresting, but I think you need a beta- there are a few mistakes that make it much harder to enjoy. |
| Nighthowler 2008-04-29 ch 14, | abuseA bit of time between chapters, but well worth the wait! The Doctor as vampire may have been done before, but I don't think I've read a story where the internal conflict between the two natures have so brilliantly been explored and brought out into the open. The duality of the Doctor's current existence as you've portrayed it is so jarring, and yet fascinating to the extreme. Will power over nature, the reader is always left wondering which will win out in the end. This story continues to fascinate. Thank you! |
| marshmallow 2008-04-22 ch 14, anon. | abusegood lord PG this gets darker by the second! still very good though |
| Nighthowler 2008-03-29 ch 13, | abuseWelcome back! As for me, sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, but life left me with a lot of chapters to catch up on. While reading, I realized with great joy - and a few shocks! - that you DO like to complicate things, don't you? Dear oh me, wherever can all this lead? The battle lines have been drawn, love versus nature, evil verses... what? Where is the line? You've set up a fascinating conundrum and I can't wait to see where your dastardly plotting leads the characters. Thanks for continuing this! |
| Marshmallows rock 2008-03-28 ch 13, | abuseThis is me: :O I'm screaming ;) x |
| Marshmallows rock 2008-03-27 ch 12, | abuseOh my word, oh my sainted aunt, oh dear. I feel so sorry for Harry, now who does he have? Poor all of them actually btw have you read my new story, altitude? x |
| marshmallow 2008-03-26 ch 11, anon. | abuseBloody hell, you're good with the cliffhangers PG! No Sarah can't be a vampire!! Then what would Harry do? |
| Marshmallows rock 2008-03-24 ch 10, | abuseOh dear Lord! My heart is now having some trouble getting back to it's usual place |
| Marshmallows rock 2008-03-24 ch 9, | abuseOh this is getting so dark. And there was me screaming at Sarah to punch him. I think Harry and Sarah are getting in way over their respective heads. But it's so good! |
| The Human Kalei-doscope. 2008-03-23 ch 9, | abuseI am thuroly in awe of your story, my friend. :D Vampire Tom Baker= Major Sexy Win. X3 Forgive me for not being more eloquinte in my review, but I like to keep things simple and to the point. This story is awesome, and I am eager to read more. ^_^ Carpe Noctem~ |
| Marshmallows rock 2008-03-23 ch 8, | abuseoh my god. please update before i die of suspense! it was bad enough having to wait for binary act |
| Marshmallows rock 2008-03-23 ch 7, | abuseOh dear. Now Harry's tied up in another fine mess isn't he?Update soon! x |
| Marshmallows rock 2008-02-01 ch 6, | abuseThis is turning pretty dark this story is, and I like seeing the Doctor's human nature versus the vampire one. I really don't think Harry knows what he's getting into now. Oh I love this story! You rock PG x |
| Nighthowler 2008-02-01 ch 6, | abuseWell, you've certainly cranked up the emotional factor here. Torn souls in the ultimate sense, with dual natures battling for the upper hand. Excellent work, especially with what's *not* being said between the characters. Subtle and moody, it just leaves you wanting more. |