very very good.

That was cool. Really dark and angsty and generally a good read. XD Nice work.

I really liked it this poem a lot, it was really good and i think is kind of i don't know but the date when you posted this was when i was felling like totally depressed, but not anymore, anyways i really liked this a lot, good work!:)

Man, you're so awesome! Many a time have I thought of things as deep as this, yet I lack the skill to put words on paper. If I had an account, I'd put you first and foremost in my faves! The amount of junk on this site - don't get me wrong, some have good plots, but have seemed to have skipped a few years of English classes (and even some of those good stories are hard to find)- completely hides the brilliant wrighters at work. In short, I adore your dark work, and I'm glad I found you. You give me renewed hope in finding -after large amounts of digging- others such as yourself. Thank you.

This is a really amazing poem! Easy to picture in your mind.

Great poem from Gaara's perspective. Very in character and very sympathetic. I love it and am going to add it to my favourites. Keep up the good work!

wow u'z is good :) me luv saying yucky grammar...k back to my smartickle talk...U R AWESOME LOVE THE POEM...my friends and i would say "dep". poor naru-san. so sad :_( o well he gets friends :) :) :) :) :) :)
hey i also read ur bio, and im not gonna repost that whole long thing but there is nothing wrong with homosexuality. im not a lesbian, but my uncle is gay, and he's been happy for 20 years :) im sorry if people are mean to u about it they're stupid ;) U GO GIRL...and write me more naruto stuff i dont watch kindom hearts of wateva its called :) :) :)

Interesting free verse =) It really shows Naru's feelings...poor Naru-chan!! So sad...

Jenni

You are amazing that was wow keep this stuff coming please

I love it.