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| marialisa 2008-04-06 ch 17,  | abuseGood to end with the film and nice it was so positive. I've enjoyed this story. |
| lily moonlight 2008-04-01 ch 17, | abuseHi, I'm awfully sorry, I've been reading your story on and off, due to time contstraints and I haven't reviewed up till now. I really enjoyed it, and thought it was a great idea, seeing the team from the outside, with a case added in as well. I thought you described the characters very accurately and didn't feel they were OOC at any point. The Final Cut was a really good end point, tied things up nicely. |
| laplandgurl 2008-04-01 ch 17, | abuseI wasn't too sure about Alex when I started reading the story - her role in taping the team for the commissioner but I like how the story envolved and the ending. |
| Madison Bellows 2008-04-01 ch 17, | abuseI love that you gave us the film, and I don't think it was OOC at all, considering it is a recruitment video. I do hope we see Alex in the future! |
| Aphina 2008-04-01 ch 17, | abuseI loved this chapter, because it shows a means to an ened, and she shows them all in a good light. i loved the Adam part he was so cute and it was completely in char! |
| marialisa 2008-03-27 ch 16, | abuseHmm, interesting. Definitely seems like a spark exists between Alex and Flack. Maybe once she has had time to get over Ben...? |
| marialisa 2008-03-27 ch 15, | abuseEnjoyed the interview with Flack :) |
| dana flame princess 2008-03-26 ch 16, | abuseLiked it! Glad there's gonna be another chappie =) |
| Madison Bellows 2008-03-26 ch 16, | abuseI'm glad the chapter finally came to you and I think it worked out great! I am also super excited for the treat of an extra character! |
| Aphina 2008-03-26 ch 16, | abuselol I really liked seeing this side to Alex and to the other detectices, it was nice that they supported her so much, and I enjoyed the mystery of what Ben was up to! |
| CsI-aDdIcTeD 2008-03-18 ch 15, | abuseI loved this chapter! WTH is up with Ben? And I can't wait for the next part! Luv ya -Serena |
| Madison Bellows 2008-03-17 ch 15, | abuseFab work on the last few chapters and I loved the twist between Mac and Flack, totally did not see it coming! I do hope this story goes somewhere even after the interviews are done! |
| Soccer-Bitch 2008-03-16 ch 15, | abusegreat chapter |
| Aphina 2008-03-16 ch 14, | abuselol that was totally left field! I didn't expect it. I demand more! I like the little connection that ehr and Flack seem to have developed, it was nice to see more of her charachter. |
| marialisa 2008-03-16 ch 14, | abusePoor Ben! Creepy twist to the whole thing. Looking forward to seeing how it all ties together. |