Great history, I loved it, but why 17 kids?? hahaha

Wow O.O 17 kids...17 mini ShikaHina-devils...x] lol. I loved it so much...hmm. What's the children's names? Wow...17 babies...DAMN SHIKAMARU! KEEP IT IN YOUR PANTS, PREV! xD

17?!!?!?!??!?
17!?!?!?!??!!?!?
17!
WOW!
cute fic ^^

Lovely sleepy romantic one-shot. I think you did a nice job with the pacing and keeping the thoughts very fluid with the scene.

17!? Wow. That was really cute and I like how you made the serious question so humorous. Keep up the great work!

Great writing. They really had 17 kids? lol.

I don't know what to think about the abrupt ending, but I feel like somehow... it fits. :] nice story.
Keep up the great writing

That ending was random. =/ But it's probably the best Shika/Hina one shot I have ever read. Good job! *gives you a cookie*

=D
Can you say ADORABLE?
Very nice.
I absolutely loved it.
My favorite line was the last one.
17 children xD

Great work!

-Victoria

17 kids?! :-o YAY! xD great fic ;) luv it x)

What the hell?! 17 kids...mama mia, they got busy. But hey! I liked the story. your Hinata reminds me of...well...me! Is it like you? Or are you different? Nvm I asked that, you don't need to answer. but sweet stuf ya got there.

loved reading this one shot :D
u written it v well :D
was quite funny too :D

lol 17 kids??! i dont think anyone cud!! lol XD
i bet hiashi had a mini anime style heart attack wen he found out they got married XD

The characters were both realistic and interesting; I think you made readers really believe in their relationship. Overall, a very lovely story! And I love the way you write. Seriously. =]

"...I want to fall asleep next to your eyes every night, and I want to wake up next to you in the morning, for the rest of my life..."

Brilliant. I don't usually have goosepimples while reading fanfiction, but when I do, the one responsible for writing that story will surely get a review... XD

Im more of a NejiHina person, but ShikaHina works too... :) Keep writing!

seventeen?!?!?!?!! holy crap. anyway, i liked it.