I'm not a fan of dark fics but this one is interesting in a weird way...Are you going to write more?PLEASE DO!

Good fic; good emotional explenations for why Xander isn't too pressed on seeing this thing dead as normal (Passions), and why Giles is as tactless as after Innocence.

Although i understand why you needed Anya out (I like B/X), I really miss her precense (She didn't even offer some vengence friends to help)

I hope you do not have her break up because of Buffy's presence at Xanders(maybe something else?). As you had her say, she has met rapevictims before, and probebly even felt their pain in her profession as demon. So if any, I would presume that Xanders care for such a victim would earn Anya's respect. (I like X/A as well)

*sighs* What an Angsty story.. but I am partailly confused... bottle? What about which bottle? Please... PLEASE update!

ouch damned harsh place to leave it. and WOW this has been a very, very intence fic and quite well writen as well. is there any chance at all that you're ever gonna pick it up again and finish it? cause if there is, I eagerly await seeing the finish.

oh and slayer, if ya dn'na like it ignore it or leave the how's & whys of what ya dn'na like so the auther knows how to improve in the future. stuff like that doesn't leave ya looking like a dumb shmuck.

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Wow... an impressive bit of work. I'm eagerly anticipating more. You're handling the pathos of the situation well - keep up the good work!

Okay, rah...that was just painful. Beautifully written, but just absolutely heart-wrenching. I doub you'll ever update, but...I can hope I suppose. Brilliant fic, wonderfully characterised, and just awesome.

Toodles.

K.

Story rocks. This story absolutely rocks. I just wish you update more often! 6 chapters in 17 months!

Anyway, it's a really interesting story, and the idea that someone actually stole the serum that makes Buffy a normal girl is definitely frightening. I'm a staunch Buffy/Giles shipper, and it hurts to see him all raging out of control ,:), but B/X is a great idea. Xander absolutely rocks in this.

Very good, nice twist at the end

i cant wait for more

Oh Xander, Xander, Xander, *sigh* Couldn't you have least taken Giles outside to shout at him? Not infront of Buffy. *g* And Giles... you total and utter retard. Wonder who Buffy will turn to now. Stupid Giles! Stab himn in the neck!

*sob* Too sad. *cough* So is she going to have a demon spawn baby?

Wow. Very, very powerful. Buffy's confusion, Xander's caring, Giles' rage: they all come alive beautifully in this story and feel very real and terribly plausible. Excellent job and terrific characterizations.