 marc 2009-06-10 . chapter 23 I love the idea of Quilleute descendants in Alaska. This story is great. Keep up the good work. |
 twilight.lova 2009-04-13 . chapter 2If it doesn't say it soon then I'm going to stop reading your story because you haven't said if the main character is Female or Male or even the name so just for warning you should stick it in there some were because it's a good story so far. |
 I Heart Seth Clearwater 2009-04-12 . chapter 23Wow I love it. Realy good |
 Cathycalamitous 2009-03-02 . chapter 23wait so... Is she having a baby? ... update soon! ^.^ |
 lee 2009-01-05 . chapter 23 a! please finish it! |
 SkyRose16 2008-12-31 . chapter 23This is such a good story! i hope you finish it soon, i'm dying to know the rest of it!! |
 Kerssica 2008-11-06 . chapter 22Write more! Really, I've been missing this fic for far too long. Please, provide me with more. Or at least, tell me when the next will be up, cause it's so cool :)!! |
 born4this 2008-08-20 . chapter 22OMG! Definately one of the most unique imprint stories i've ever read! How did you come up with all of this! Its a work of art! I loved when Portia called Carlisle 'garfield' that was hilarious! i really love it and i knew there was something fishy about Perry but holy cow i didn't expect him wanting to 'mate' with Portia! Wow! Anyway i was wondering what would Jake/Portia's child would turn out to be if they have children... maybe it could be some new hybrid but thats definately up to you! Keep up the awesome work! |
 Kerssica 2008-07-23 . chapter 21Odds being; small town, at least she could mess up a hundred lives or so :P
Would be quite the sight.
I'm glad you finally posted this chap. But the vamps already knew she was a shapeshifter right? So why does she mention it again? And Charlie knows Leah right? I mean, they've met before and all, so why would Jacob introduce them to eachother??
A tit bit confusing but nevertheless a relief reading.
And knowing you didn't let this fic die. I was quite a bit upset about that idea...I surely love the Imprint fic, but what I miss is the tight bond she had with Jacob when she first met him. I mean; the feelings spat off my laptop screen and now they're cooled down and almost nowhere to be found...I hope you have a reason for that...or perhaps it happened accidentally. You never know now do you?
Looking forward to the next chap!! :D:D!!
ciao Bella |
 Sad.On.Sunny.Days 2008-07-13 . chapter 20Nice job portraying the uncivalized ways of human-eating vampires. |
 Sad.On.Sunny.Days 2008-07-13 . chapter 19HAHHAHA! It takes energy to HEAL! Leah beat Perry's butt pretty well didn't she. HAHAHA! Funnieness. |
 Sad.On.Sunny.Days 2008-07-13 . chapter 18EH, Perry just gave my family a bad name...
He got quite scary for a second there. He probably can't control his body, like Portia, but he dosen't have a reason to stop. I have no doubt that he could have raped her.
Scary.
I think Leah imprinted. |
 Sad.On.Sunny.Days 2008-07-13 . chapter 16Aw, 'c'mon now. Edward wouldn't just smell her like that.
Well he might, be he wouldn't comment on how 'exquisite' she smells. He si too much of a gentleman. Not to mention he would hear how much Jake cared for her and wouldn't give him a reason to phase when he has his arm wrapped around Bella.
Ok, I didn't mean to flame, or anything, but I just had to say that.
I would be so ** at Jacob. I would...
Turn into a kangaroo and kick him in the crotch, then as he doubles over in pain, I would turn into a Llama to spit in his hair. Then I would turn into the grizzly and just sit on him for a while as punishment.
OK.
Also...I mentioned my name was Perry...well my forst is Sam. So I would keep reading, Sam, Perry, and I, and stuff like that where you just keep writing my full name. It was funny, but It doesnt end there... My younger brother's name is Jacob, and we live on a reservation in western Washington.
Go figure, right?
That was the LONGEST review I have ever recieved, writen, or even seen. Enjoy. Your fic destrves major kudos. =] |
 Sad.On.Sunny.Days 2008-07-13 . chapter 15LOL, you should have had her land on the Space Needle!
Do you live in Alaska. You went into lots of detail while she was there. |
 Sad.On.Sunny.Days 2008-07-13 . chapter 14Hey, my last name is Perry =]
You spelled it the same and everything. Most people spell it Parry if its a first name. |