A great poem fic. Very good.

Oh. My. God.

Wow.

I don't even know what to say, I'm speechless. Your poem is just so...touching, so deep. Honestly, I almost didn't even click on it. I thought is was just going to be some SW nerd messing things up. But this was good. No, good is a crap word. This is magnificent, superb, beyond belief amazing!

It's just that good.

Wonderfully done. Padme's reflection on what was as to what is was depicted very well. It was so sad though. However, the inclusion of Vader in the final downfall of Padme was at first a bit questionable to me. However, the more I though about it the more plausible it seemed. Sideous has so much influence on Vader that his final "test" could be to destroy the last vestige of Anakin-Padme. Anyway, thank you for sharing your work with us :)