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| shadow thief wolf 2008-05-03 ch 26,  | abuseYou did a wonderful job writing this story! The plot was creative and very unique with several interesting and original characters with intriguing personalities. Amazing story! |
| hea10k 2008-04-07 ch 19, | abusePhynix sounds like a well made character... the last section was written exceptionally well, continue (well, I think you're done, I mean I'll continue reading) |
| shadow thief wolf 2008-04-04 ch 24, | abuseI didn't expect Sebastian to go with Jane, nice little twist there. The whole chapter was really good. Only thing is that you made a few mistakes like instead of writing John, you wrote Josh and a few other little things like that. i can't wait to read more, update soon! |
| hea10k 2008-04-01 ch 18, | abuseaw nice chapter :D I'm kind of skipping around, or so it appears, but I understand so far :) wonderful job, again your style is amazing :D |
| shadow thief wolf 2008-03-30 ch 23, | abuseWonderful job on the last few chapters! I can't wait to see what happens next!! |
| shadow thief wolf 2008-03-22 ch 21, | abuseI'm sorry for not reviewing your other chapters! I've been really busy lately. All of the past chapters were amazing though! You did a wonderfull job on the whole thing! I can't wait until you update. |
| hea10k 2008-03-17 ch 15, | abusenice :D thanks for the reminder :) |
| hea10k 2008-03-17 ch 14, | abuseAPPLES! and my oh my, why are people so mean to wolves (not seriously, I understand, but still so mean) keep updating :D |
| shadow thief wolf 2008-03-12 ch 13, | abuseGreat chapter! I loved it. Sorry for not writing a review sooner. Great job.^^ |
| hea10k 2008-02-22 ch 13, | abuseOOH! I liked it :D the fortune teller annoyed me just like she did in the movie though :( It's not the same one is it? Because that one died...anyways... find the parents, find the parents! (alive!) |
| shadow thief wolf 2008-02-20 ch 12, | abuseThat was an amazing chapter! I loved it! Great job. |
| shadow thief wolf 2008-02-19 ch 11, | abuseSorry for not reviewing sooner! Great past few chapters!! I can't believe you turned Gabriel into a dog, I can't wait to find out what happens! |
| hea10k 2008-02-19 ch 4, | abuseI like Sarah more and more each chapter. "the old man over there shouted it to stop you during our little fight.” hah! |
| hea10k 2008-02-19 ch 3, | abuseOOH loved this. Your detail use is awesome! |
| shadow thief wolf 2008-02-11 ch 7, | abuseGood job on both chapters! Update soon |