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Reviews For: Lori's Dream

vampyrgirl1997
2008-05-11
ch 4,
abusehey i love this show too! i had a huge crush on danny and brandon! love the story please keep updating!
realityXwarper
2008-03-30
ch 1,
abuseI wish I could see this episode in full. I've seen some parts and Haim was great. You're doing a brilliant job with keeping Merton in character (he was my favourite too!) and I'm really interested to find out what's happening. One suggestion... longer, detailed chapters maybe? This is a really good story and you've definately got potential so I guess I'd like to see more of what's happening and more into the characters' minds. But keep writing! I can't wait to find out :-D x
ang5523
2008-01-17
ch 1,
abuseAbby could you please put me in the story my name is Crystal Rose Minamoto and I have long blond hair with bright crystal clear green eyes please pretty please.
Ghostwriter
2008-01-11
ch 2,
abuseI vaguely remember that ep. Of course, at the time, I'm ashamed to say I had no clue who Haim or Feldman were. But great job here. Catch ya on the flip side.
Obscurus Lupa
2008-01-10
ch 2,
abuseI like that Haim wants Merton as his vampire friend, heh heh. :D Kinda good so far, not much to work with right now.
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