This is a very interesting story. The characters are pretty cool. How often do you update your stories? Keep up the awsome writing. ^^

you're right, I do like your writing style!

I have to say I am stunned by this work. Sentences and vocabulary are extremely varied and colourful, spelling and grammar are immaculate (a very short hop from perfect in fact and better than some published books I have read) and characterisation and plotline are strong. It is also nice that you do not feel the need to rush into a story and bring vampires into everything right from the start.

It's very refreshing to read a fanfic not written like speech or mimicking the style of Stephenie Meyer and that does not idolise vampires and have them using their strengths to play childish pranks on humans. What's more, this story does not play out like a wish list of changes you would like to make to Twilight and the world it is set in, using frankly lame excuses to justify them and maintain "continuity."

Now, others may think I am perhaps being a little excessive in my praise or exagerating, but I truly believe that behind this story, I see a deep well of writing talent and I look forward to the next installment with great anticipation.

I love your style of writing, and this story is soo intriguing!
Update soon, little Ria!!

Hey Jag!!
I really love this story, you are such a talented writer, though I think you already know that. :P
Anyway, it's so much fun to read your stuff, good job!

Penny

I'm glad you've started writing again. You have a good story line coming along, with intriguing characters. Keep up the good work.

Pretty good Mar. Maybe a little too in detail at the begining, but thats just me. Try harder to get it out faster next time. ;)
- Aly

So beautifully written Jaggy! It was long, but long chappie's are the best! Continue like this seriously! Oh and i get dibs on your first story!

i'm really liking how this is turning out. update woman! i want to see the first vampire interaction:)

Mar - This is Alyson (AT) Please update soon! Please!

Very good! Just, enter the vampires! Put more things into the mix!1

Glad to see that you conitnued! For a while there I thought you had just quit. Can't wait for more.

I'M REVIEWING!
Gah! I love it so much! The formal language! The mystery (but Tony is a vampire, right?), the...bitchiness. It's unbelievebly awesome!

omg!! This is amazing!..and sad=/ You are such a great writer! Update please!

I loved it, and can't wait for the next update. I love how you write and how completely evil you made Bella's mother and how stupid you made her father.