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ronandhermioneareforever
2009-07-31 . chapter 1
I liked this!
hushhushyou
2009-02-08 . chapter 1
This. Was. Awesome.
The End.

Just kidding lol but no really, this was amazing. I usually avoid reading things where it's in the character's point of view 'cuz I just like 3rd person better than.. 2nd person? I don't know if that's what it's called but yah hah. Although I can say that you've managed to write both of their points of view well and barely out of character! I still find it weird picturing Casey and Derek [more Casey though lol] cussing but that wasn't a big deal. And THE END was to die for! I loved this story a lot. Made me really giddy and protective Derek is a definite LOVE. So great story, you did a splendid job :]!
flirtt.
2008-10-11 . chapter 1
cute :)
A.Annie.N
2008-07-11 . chapter 1
Lol I really enjoyed that.

Nicely done.

Annie
juliashappyfish
2008-05-13 . chapter 1
I've actually read this before but didn't review :p So here I am, telling you how awesome this fic is! Well done!
Person Of A Strange Origin
2008-05-06 . chapter 1
That was so very truly cute! I loved it. It was a very original idea! Fantastic job!
Person Of A Strange Origin
Aishitewu
2008-04-25 . chapter 1
I loved it! *favorites* :)
chinkybaby
2008-03-05 . chapter 1
good!
Ghostwriter
2008-02-26 . chapter 1
Ha ha ha. Cool. Catch ya on the flip side.
smi1e
2008-01-28 . chapter 1
:] I really loved it.
sologirl101
2008-01-20 . chapter 1
Aw cuteness...Good job :)
Reverse Psychology
2008-01-12 . chapter 1
I LOVE it! It was amazingly good especially while having to use all of those weird words... Great job =}
AngelOfDeath07
2008-01-11 . chapter 1
I loved it!
It was both funny and sweet!
I noticed you used the words "Underdog" and "carrot" lol
Great, great fic
Deanie
Lanter
2008-01-11 . chapter 1
Nice job.
TheVelvetVoice
2008-01-10 . chapter 1
short and cute and to the point. loved it.
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