LOVE THE STORY IT'S GREAT! though i read the second one first be acsident so at least know it makes more sense! you r are a truly awasume writer, great story, chariters, plot ect i LOVED IT! i keep reading your work over and over and over again . you are making me sane until the next reaper is on the telly because ithink your story is that good. If you can and i know i am asking alot please please please write a third! u no make it a trillogy that would truly be the most amazingy thing ni the entire world and i shall reweve u on every step of the way. i don't want to push u into something u dont want to do but do consider it, please write more it will be ashame for such an amazing writing talent to go to wastw

your number one fan on both storys even pheraphs a thrid?! love ... ME

I really liked your story you captured the escence of the characters and portrayed them wonderfully. I just hope that it has a good ending. Keep up the good work.

Nice story. :)

Neat story

I love this story. Please write a sequel?

What a cliffhanger ending! I can't thank you enough for writing this. It was a perfect episode. It all played out in my head as I read it. You did an amazing job coming up with a soul, a vessel and a victim. I love when he saw the dead waitress. I'm intrigued by the ending and what will happen to him now. I linked this at TwoP. Will you be writing more? I'd love to try one but I don't know if I could come up with something this good.

Interesting story so far. I especially liked the part with Gladys. Keep up the good work!

great chapter or is it a one shot? anyway good job