How sad! Very interesting though- if Cloud had killed her rather than Sephiroth. Very good- keep it up!

wow that was powerful. There is so much that could written about these two. They were made for each other and they fate was sad. Great job!

This section of the game gets written about a lot, so it was a surprise - but a nice surprise - when you altered it. The voices in Cloud's head were very well done; I think that was my favourite part.

It got slightly melodramatic towards the end, but mostly the writing was very good - I liked the imagery about Aerith. And I liked that it ended ambiguously.

At this point in the game, Cloud wasn't aware that he was a puppet though. Other than that, I think his reaction was believable. I enjoyed this. :)

>Ohmigosh.

Can you say angst?

That was horribly sad, and gosh, if that actually happened, I think Cloud wouldn't be around in Advent Children...>_<

Your wording is beautiful, as always. Nice job.

[miss ;aerith]

Wow, very dark, but very good...and it definitely caught me off guard, even with the author's note at the beginning :) I'm very impressed!

Incredible fic... you are equally skilled in the dark arts as you are in the light and fluffy arts... lol. I love this story, even though the sadness is so utterly intense.

OMG it is teh suxor XD j/k you know it is good, silly. Hey didn't we see this movie? Secret Window? Except Cloud's other self is called Sephiroth and doesn't take over in the end... or does he? I can imagine Cloud developing an unhealthy fascination with corn after this... and getting some corrective teeth braces... MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. It was a good twist on what happened tho