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toothchick 2008-07-01 ch 17,	abuseThis way, Gil & Sara will call their own shots, taking control of their lives.
Morbid DramaQueen10 2008-07-01 ch 17,	abuseO, goody, a wedding!
Sierra Janeway 2008-06-29 ch 17,	abuseI was just wondering when you were going to update. :) Definitely worth waiting for; lots of highs and lows that made it a great read. Grissom and Sara may be leaving, but they're also getting married, etc. Very, very good. I really hope before you finish this that Hannah West will get exactly what she deserves. Keep up the amazing work. :)
faketreefinger 2008-06-27 ch 17,	abuseTotally worth the wait. “So what’s the reason for inviting us to the inner sanctum?” lol. I don't know why but I always laugh when people refer to Grissom's house as a lair of sorts. Simple me.
angsty 2008-06-27 ch 17,	abuseWow, so much in this chapter! And yet, I feel like we missed a critical conversation between G&S before the gang came over. Maybe the details will leak out around the edges of upcoming chapters? Anyway, please keep going with this story!
leddy 2008-06-27 ch 17,	abuseVery nice chapter. I don't blame Grissom and Sara wanting to leave after all the problems with that kid. I can understand where their friends are coming from too. It's nice they have decided to get married.
csifan 2008-06-26 ch 17, anon.	abuseI am SO loving this series, VR. If only you could be paid to do this full time. Your intimate knowledge of the characters and command of the language are a constant joy. I especially love the little moments of tenderness between Sara and Gil such as, when she was aware of his stress informing the team of their resignations and reached down to put a comforting hand on his thigh which, calmed him. Beautifully written moments like those are a big part of what elevates your work above the rest. Thank you so much for continuing to share your awesome talent!!
CSIgsrFANOH 2008-06-26 ch 17,	abuseYeah--a wedding! I think they should both leave. It would be constant 'buzz' about this whole incident.
sdbeth 2008-06-26 ch 17,	abuseHi, That was very good. I was wondering where you were going to go with Hannah since I figured it wasn't over. It always makes me sad, though, when Grissom and Sara leave Vegas and their friends, even when it makes perfect sense as it does here. Vegas is a small town, professionally. Thanks for the update. Beth
wobbear 2008-06-26 ch 1,	abuseRe my ch 17 comment: why does ffnet fiddle with figures? I typed three thousand. What's 30 words - a dribble?
idahomom 2008-06-26 ch 17,	abuseI was so excited to see a new chapter to this story. I have really enjoyed reading it. I think you capture the essence of the characters! Thanks for the great writing and twists!
wobbear 2008-06-26 ch 17,	abuseSo ... 30 words is a "short" chapter? You're working on a whole different level to us mere mortals. This was a lovely reward to find on my return from the dentist. You're great at adding little touches of detail to scenes, describing the feelings and situations so they really come to life on the screen. I look forward to the humongous chapter to come!
gsrshipper 2008-06-26 ch 17,	abuseYAY! A geek wedding! Thanks for the update. I love this story so much. :)
Hooleo 2008-06-26 ch 17,	abuseDo you REALLY need another life besides writing? Do you know how hard it is for us to wait on chapters? You are one of the best fan fiction writers so please don't keep us waiting so long for the next chapter!
jtbwriter 2008-06-26 ch 17,	abuseOh...thank you. Thank you for Sara not leaving to save Grissom's career...and for him not blaming or pushing her away. And for Greg and Brass taking control..love it! Catherine has got to get over her unrequited love for Grissom...you really put that so quietly and under the radar! But the last line...thanks! Hannah and the trolls do not get to win! LOL! Now what?:)

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