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Reviews for: The Joy in Living
mini pouce06
2008-11-16 . chapter 2
Hello,
Your story is sweet.
Bye
mini pouce
Kei
2008-07-01 . chapter 2
I loved it x3
hope your write more stories like this!
tati1
2008-02-03 . chapter 2
I liked the fic. A few pointers though; you switched the tenses from 'Heero' to 'I' twice (or something), and the second chapter has half the stuff in the first (I dunno if that's an error, or if you forgot you put it there, or what, but I thought I'd mention it). The last thing isn't actually your fault, but I just thought I'd point out that after caesaren sections new mothers (due to the surgery) are incapable of holding their children for awhile - I think it's like up to two weeks (though you could ignore that and just say it's 'cuz Heero's super-human. *shrugs*)
I enjoyed the fic. It's somewhat similar to a plot or three I've had in mind for awhile, so it was cool to see a similar idea floating around.
--tati1
aya-chan
2008-01-15 . chapter 2
lol..aww that so cutee! So is Heero pregnant agin ("Which reminded me of what I needed to tell them tonight…")?
rena555
2008-01-14 . chapter 2
CUTE! i loved it
apple and cinnamon
2008-01-14 . chapter 2
uwahh, i loved it beta-chan. really good ending, the babies sounded super cute.

=]

- angel-chan
-MJ-0.0'
2008-01-10 . chapter 1
that last part was really funny I like this story a couple of spelling msitakes but its okay just to let you know okay ? and yeah the plot and the drama was really good and you used in teh correct way so that it will make kind of more dramatic ya know what Im trying to say right? well whatever please update soon...

mary jose
tu mejor amiga...*I think thats kind of sappy**
angel
2008-01-10 . chapter 1
Oh!! this is interesting. I wasn't really sure when I first started reading it but got hook during the middle. So waiting for the next update. :D
apple and cinnamon
2008-01-10 . chapter 1
holy freaking crap beta-chan, this is so good! quadruplets? god, and i thought i was crazy when i got yuki pregnant with three... wow! haha, i can't even imagine.

i like it though, really do, so update this soon! and the light side of me... yay ^^

- angel
aya-chan
2008-01-10 . chapter 1
Oh i LOVE a good mpreg story. 1 time i read one with all of them have a baby at the sometime.can wait to see which baby after 2 months of pregnancy 1,2,3,4 to that daddy 1.lol
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