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| BananaLollipop7 2008-05-05 ch 15,  | abuseSweet ending, glad you kept it up! Though sometimes it did feel like you were skipping bits to get to the interesting parts, or ran too quickly through bits that could've been extended (thinking of the Korriban sequence). However, overall it was a great read. |
| Taeniaea 2008-04-02 ch 15, | abusegreat story!! |
| Erudasi 2008-03-27 ch 15, | abuseAw, such a sweet ending! Thanks for keeping the story going. |
| general-joseph-dickson 2008-03-27 ch 15, | abuseBao Dur The Cable Guy! LOL! We can tell by Vandar's speach Jedi dont marry often. Kex did a much better job. |
| general-joseph-dickson 2008-03-25 ch 14, | abuseHK has reached a new low. Enjoying the slaughter of little pink flowers. Oh dear. |
| BlackBaccaraRose 2008-03-24 ch 14, | abusesweet please keep it up |
| BlackBaccaraRose 2008-03-19 ch 13, | abusesweet keep it up |
| Erudasi 2008-03-18 ch 13, | abuseI'm not sure douche bag is appropriate Mandalorian slang :P So they're finally off to grab Krysta, huzzah! Is that 'Krysta Ordo' business foreshadowing? I think it'd be nice if Canderous settled down, had a family... lots of little force sensitive Ordos running around with a former Sith lord mother. Great stuff. Will there be lots more HK meatbag humor in the next chapter? I do so love his sense of humor... whether he means it or not. heh. |
| general-joseph-dickson 2008-03-18 ch 13, | abuseCanderous and HK are going to have fun. |
| Erudasi 2008-03-05 ch 12, | abuseI too am glad Mical is dead... he looked... old... and his mannerisms were more than slightly irritating. Thank goodness for girly meatbag bodies! But... I am slightly saddened by Atton, I enjoyed his sarcasm. C'est la vie! He lives on in spirit *a second of silence for the departed* Moving on: Yay Canderous! |
| BlackBaccaraRose 2008-03-04 ch 12, | abusesweet |
| general-joseph-dickson 2008-03-04 ch 12, | abuseSo, Bao gets to bang th crap out of the exile. Always liked the Zabrak better. They are a good match. I knew about the cut. |
| BlackBaccaraRose 2008-03-03 ch 11, | abusesweet |
| general-joseph-dickson 2008-02-28 ch 11, | abuseCool job. |
| general-joseph-dickson 2008-02-22 ch 10, | abuseI would guess Im the General Man. Let me say my KOTOR story isn't this interresting. Keep going, I like how you got it revolving around the Candy Man. |