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Reviews for: In Armor Not So Shining
Spazztasticle
2008-02-04 . chapter 1
aw. Inukag isnt my fav ship but it is sweet :3
inuyashalover8536
2008-01-25 . chapter 1
ok this is so good you cant stop here. this is awsome and would be 10x better if you keep it going please.
Ayjah
2008-01-10 . chapter 1
He is always there for her is he not? Grumpy but there lol
Kagome126
2008-01-10 . chapter 1
So cute! You should make an epilogue or something, you are so talented!
LadyCash
2008-01-10 . chapter 1
Very nicely done.
This is reminiscent of Dolphingirl0113's Perfectly Flawed, but
different enough to be safe. Were you inspired by her?

Good characterization, pacing, emotions. Surprising twist that the guy turned out to be a jerk. But glad that IY was there to pick her up again. Kinda missed the 'what were you doing?' discussion they might of had, but it was good just the same.
Very good read.
panchat
2008-01-10 . chapter 1
lol, great oneshot, but the end made me frown a bit. He two times her all the time with kikyo lol. i'd say going out with another guy is getting just deserts for the baka hanyou
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