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| xdannyx 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abusethat was so good! |
| marialisa 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseI get so little time to surf stories on this site I end up missing gems like this one so thanks for the tip! Like how you changed POV's and how Danny's jealousy and grief get all mixed up together. I particularly love Flack's response but then I am a bit of a Flack fan (but then, whats not to like?). Great ending ;) |
| A.Boleyn 2008-01-11 ch 1, | abuseWould it be possible for you to quit your job/school and simply write daily fan fic? Perhaps I should hire you as my personal writer. I was disappointed with the (as usual) lack of DL in the most recent episode, but your fic brightened things up! :) I love how you have written Danny's behavior - stubborn and hurting, jealous and reserved. The elevator "scene" with Flack was comical, and so dead-on with characterization that I could visualize it. And great moment you chose to bring up the bug eating! Oh, your fics make me happy. More, more! *throws roses* |
| LocoGreggo 2008-01-11 ch 1, | abuse*grins* That was an excellent continuation. *applauds* |
| nikki.02 2008-01-11 ch 1, | abuseI'm really, REALLY liking this series! It's so cute! Loved this one! |
| mel60 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuseYou've really done a remarkable job with this. I absolutely love your writing, my dear, and I can't wait for the next installment... |
| MariShal 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuseMy favorite trio, perfect! Love jealous Danny, very cute. My favorite part was the "missed you" at the end, aw |
| p3karen 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuseLove this!! I'm dyeing for a D/L moment it seems now that their together we don't get any. |
| Jommy23 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuseLove it! |
| hplbug 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuseIt was hovercrap but it was funny just the same. Good job. |
| ncisabbylover 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuseaw yay i love it thank you so much love abbylover |
| EmpireClover 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuseReally good. I liked this, alot! Off to read the other parts, not in order now! |
| Heidi 2008-01-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseHaha it was hovercrap. Great story...continue with it...run with it...have the others find out about them dating and then keep going and give us more of danny and lindsay loving!! |
| kcatlin 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuse'She's mine' Aw, very good story. BTW she said hovercrap. :) |
| Mariekjj 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuseA great continuation of a great series! Danny's so damn cute when he's jealous :D You did a wonderful job! |