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Reviews For: Tease Me If You Love Me Part III

xdannyx
2008-03-10
ch 1,
abusethat was so good!
marialisa
2008-01-20
ch 1,
abuseI get so little time to surf stories on this site I end up missing gems like this one so thanks for the tip!

Like how you changed POV's and how Danny's jealousy and grief get all mixed up together. I particularly love Flack's response but then I am a bit of a Flack fan (but then, whats not to like?).

Great ending ;)
A.Boleyn
2008-01-11
ch 1,
abuseWould it be possible for you to quit your job/school and simply write daily fan fic? Perhaps I should hire you as my personal writer. I was disappointed with the (as usual) lack of DL in the most recent episode, but your fic brightened things up! :) I love how you have written Danny's behavior - stubborn and hurting, jealous and reserved. The elevator "scene" with Flack was comical, and so dead-on with characterization that I could visualize it. And great moment you chose to bring up the bug eating!

Oh, your fics make me happy. More, more! *throws roses*
LocoGreggo
2008-01-11
ch 1,
abuse*grins* That was an excellent continuation. *applauds*
nikki.02
2008-01-11
ch 1,
abuseI'm really, REALLY liking this series! It's so cute!
Loved this one!
mel60
2008-01-10
ch 1,
abuseYou've really done a remarkable job with this. I absolutely love your writing, my dear, and I can't wait for the next installment...
MariShal
2008-01-10
ch 1,
abuseMy favorite trio, perfect! Love jealous Danny, very cute.
My favorite part was the "missed you" at the end, aw
p3karen
2008-01-10
ch 1,
abuseLove this!! I'm dyeing for a D/L moment it seems now that their together we don't get any.
Jommy23
2008-01-10
ch 1,
abuseLove it!
hplbug
2008-01-10
ch 1,
abuseIt was hovercrap but it was funny just the same. Good job.
ncisabbylover
2008-01-10
ch 1,
abuseaw yay i love it thank you so much
love abbylover
EmpireClover
2008-01-10
ch 1,
abuseReally good. I liked this, alot! Off to read the other parts, not in order now!
Heidi
2008-01-10
ch 1, anon.
abuseHaha it was hovercrap. Great story...continue with it...run with it...have the others find out about them dating and then keep going and give us more of danny and lindsay loving!!
kcatlin
2008-01-10
ch 1,
abuse'She's mine'


Aw, very good story.

BTW she said hovercrap. :)
Mariekjj
2008-01-10
ch 1,
abuseA great continuation of a great series! Danny's so damn cute when he's jealous :D
You did a wonderful job!
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