The ending was hilarious. :)

LOL. That was a VERY entertaining read! And good job on the vocabulary usage! I had to look up some just to understand wth was going on xD. I really adore your writing style!

WHOOT!

The writing style is so Shikamaru. It's unbelievable.

Poor Naruto, what with the beating into submission.

Once again, Ino is a **.

Shikamaru and the whole lot are abused, as per usual, which is so true.

Brilliant.

That was hilarious.
"LET'S HOPE YOU BROUGHT YOUR DANCING SHOES!"
Hehe... I laughed out loud.
:)
I especially like how Shikamaru's character is portrayed... it's really accurate, I think. I also liked the description of Sasuke's "strangely amicable" meeting with Itachi.
Definitely adding to my favorites.
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interesting

a wonderfully humorous and delightfully true to character composition. well-written and an absolute joy to read. one commiserates with shikamaru-his doom is predestined.