This is a good story. Please continue. Mugen and Fuu forever.

love it <3

thanks so much for the encouragements everyone! i'm trying to get all the pms and personal replies back but for some reason i'm being swamped by that 'network error' bull. hopefully my replies will be sent. <3

This will not end well. I just hope that the cloaked figure makes his/her enterance soon. I don't think Fuu and Nekomi can save Mugen on their own! Update soon!

Talk about 'what a tangled web we weave'...both you and Nekomi deserve a prize! That girl has been burning the candle at both end for years, and not doing such a bad job. However, it looks like things have finally caught up with her, no? And Mugen certainly has an ugly clean up job. I liked what Fuu said- that he shouldn't have to bear the burden of both their sins. Nicely put.

But I still haven't put together who the cloaked figure is yet...lol!

Your story telling technique is beyond everyone that I know. It is always a joy to read your updates. Fantabulous job as always, and thanks so much for all your hard work and talent!

oh wow. What a chapter. I hope Nekomi makes it in time!

TOO MUCH?! XD

I'll explain soon my loves!

So Nekomi is alive! Right when I thought I had this story figured out I realize that nothing is ever as it seems. I am not at all happy that Nekomi is alive, but I am sure you have a good reason for it. I am curious, is the hooded figure possibly Jin or maybe Yatsuha? Hmm...ah! Please update soon, my brain can't handle the torture! Later and great work!

Come on Vivibell! (I still can't forget that name)

That is just too much for my little pea-brain...! What?! I was still trying to get my head wrapped around the cloaked figure, but now this? All I can come up with is that she had one hell of a decoy...

And I am goig to assume that Mugen is now in the process of kicking a lot of ass, and that the cloak figure is now going to be forced to come into play.

You are extremely naughty for throwing a monkey in the wrench and a cliffie to end all cliffies. Please have mercy and put me out of my misery!

xoxo

ah, cliff hanger! I am going nuts here, i can't wait to find out what happens. Mugen you better live, dammit! :)

I am just leaving a quick note to say I wont do a private review reply for maybe a chapter or two! XD because the intricacies of the plot are showing their threads, I am going to do some hardcore writing and then get to my reviews so I do not spoil anything for my beloved readers. (:

TALK TO YOU SOON and keep watching this space! I should have a chapter done for tonight! XD

I am glad that Nekomi's place in the story was cut, there is no reason that she should live free when Fuu in locked up bruised and somewhat emotionally shattered. I just felt so bad for Fuu, but still Fuu is too good of a person to condone what Mugen just did. My goodness Mugen just can't seem to get things right, but something tells me that even though the worst isn't over yet, Fuu and Mugen will finally sort things out! I hope that you update soon! Later and great work!

Well- good bye to bad rubbish I say. I am glad that Mugen killed Nekomi. She was tainted goods. I also can't see how Tanaka will keep his word on letting Fuu go- that old too many people know kinda thing. So another blood bath? But maybe our caped crusader will finaly reveal himself?

I've been wracking my brain about who it could be, but...

Great job Turtle, and I look forward to your next chapter!

wow, what a chapter! good work, i love your writing style. :)

-dances- woot, woot! the hooded figure is... (drum roll)

not telling! (huggles)

don't worry, all shall be revealed my lovlies!