This was just... wow. I mean it. Wow. At first I read it and wasn't sure, then I followed the link to LJ (you're right, by the way, the formatting over there is beautiful - much better than on here) and read it again, and the utter brilliance of it slapped me in the face. Well done.

Very well done! Lyrical, and a poignancy of the characters.

Wow. That was kinda cool. I love a good ramble. Keep up the great work!