 The Red Fedora 1/9/12 . chapter 1Very funny:) |
 LisaRosa 6/16/10 . chapter 1I love this story! I've read it a few times now. It's so cute and funny, especially with the koi involved. :D |
 MokonaYi 1/13/10 . chapter 1"It's my house! Don, it's my house! I get the first shower."
LOL! This is a very nicely written story and I only managed to find it after 2 years since it was published? Anyway, I would love to see juvenile Charlie sometimes and one of my favorite lines is this!
Thanks for the wonderful story! :D |
 whitelighter013 9/30/09 . chapter 1love it! when i have my own house... i'll have my own Koi pond. and i'll name them too. , |
 csimesser1 9/26/09 . chapter 1that was great loved it |
 B.A.D.Child 8/21/08 . chapter 1LOL O I love it it's sute lol and funny we need more writers like you the character's are fantastic |
 thebondgirl 1/27/08 . chapter 1:) a nice dose of laughter to keep me going through the day!
loved it! |
 lullabyeleague 1/18/08 . chapter 1I really enjoyed this short piece. Very well done. |
 Water-Soter 1/16/08 . chapter 1Cute, very cute. A few gramatical errors but very cute. Can you tell me what LJ site it was so I can join. It sounds like tons of fun! |
 jd burns 1/13/08 . chapter 1OMG! That was *HILARIOUS!* Loved it, loved it, loved it! |
 Taura Callisto 1/13/08 . chapter 1Cute and funny, a great combination! |
 Starrylizard 1/11/08 . chapter 1Yayz, it's finished. Loved it. Very cute! :) |
 Kiki Cabou 1/11/08 . chapter 1Great dialogue, and very funny too. I liked Charlie's crack about "I never fell in the koi pond," especially in light of a notorious outtake with David Krumholtz actually falling into the koi pond - it made the Season 1 gag reel. Cute story. :) |
 tearbos 1/10/08 . chapter 1So cute and very funny. |
 coconut-dreamer 1/10/08 . chapter 1I loved it! See, we never really grow up. Reminds me of my family (and friends too). I love how Charlie named all the Koi (something I'd do) and how Alan threatened to send the two of them to bed without dinner. |