Very funny:)

I love this story! I've read it a few times now. It's so cute and funny, especially with the koi involved. :D

"It's my house! Don, it's my house! I get the first shower."

LOL! This is a very nicely written story and I only managed to find it after 2 years since it was published? Anyway, I would love to see juvenile Charlie sometimes and one of my favorite lines is this!

Thanks for the wonderful story! :D

love it! when i have my own house... i'll have my own Koi pond. and i'll name them too. ,

that was great loved it

LOL O I love it it's sute lol and funny we need more writers like you the character's are fantastic

:) a nice dose of laughter to keep me going through the day!

loved it!

I really enjoyed this short piece. Very well done.

Cute, very cute. A few gramatical errors but very cute. Can you tell me what LJ site it was so I can join. It sounds like tons of fun!

OMG! That was *HILARIOUS!* Loved it, loved it, loved it!

Cute and funny, a great combination!

Yayz, it's finished. Loved it. Very cute! :)

Great dialogue, and very funny too. I liked Charlie's crack about "I never fell in the koi pond," especially in light of a notorious outtake with David Krumholtz actually falling into the koi pond - it made the Season 1 gag reel. Cute story. :)

So cute and very funny.

I loved it! See, we never really grow up. Reminds me of my family (and friends too). I love how Charlie named all the Koi (something I'd do) and how Alan threatened to send the two of them to bed without dinner.