:(( cliffie ending :(( why? still love it though... :)

you should put the sad one up but then we all find out its just a dream of tobias or rachel or both then the happier one will happen because they are both driven by that dream and they make sure it doesn't come true :)

i so want more :)

What! No ending! That stinks! I read that whole story and I don't even know what happens! Good technique as a writer, but very bad on the readers! Agh! That's mean!

I think I'd have to agree with you. This story is very one sided and cruel. I'm not liking Tobias very much here, and pity doesn't even begin to describe how I feel about Rachel. Gus is horrible. He's worse than horrible. He's an abomination!

I like your style. You seem to know the books pretty well. Congrats. That's all I have to say for now.

Kep writing the storry. Muhahahahaha. Before I...I dunno but it won't be good.

yeah...you kinda make all the animorphs go out like bitches in this chapter...seeing how i grew up reading these books, i dont really like how everyone kinda goes out like a punk. the actual version of them dying fighting to the death in space does a lot more justice to them as characters...

Chills me to the bone. UPDATE!

WHAT? It's finished? NO!

You really HAVE to keep writing! PLEASE! It was harsh and gruesome but you really need to finish it! NO! *Ahem* It was a great story.

Sad and gory but it was good. Anyway, PLEASE write an epilogue or something...please?

Ethereal Laeye

AH! No! That idiot! O_o'' Tobias doesn't think that Rachel/Gus is the real Gus? That idiot! He's not going to... AHH! No! -whimper-

You have a cruel, cruel mind... aha! I know! I'll just imagine that Rachel explains to him somehow and... and... Crap. -thinks-

Great story! )

Booyah. D

Oh! POR Rachel! Stupid... ARGH! Did I mention I want to SQUESH Gus?

-two minutes of un-typable obscenity-

Tobias! You idiot! Fight! FIGHT! -grumblemuttermutter-

ANYWAY, still awesome. Go Clara! D I want Gus to be squished like a bug... A big, ugly bug that deserves to be SQUASHED! -evil laughter-

Sneaky, Sneaky Rachel! xD