 yumi-maki 2008-02-02 . chapter 1You know I don't know if this should really be classified under suspense - action seems more fitting.
Anyway that wasn't really important. What I want to say is that this is very well done, a perfect gen fic. You manage to portray Sakura quite well and the way that you show the conflict between her former self and her new, improved self is done perfetcly - it's a gradual change and it reminds me of just how much growing Sakura did over those two and a half years. Good job! |