I don't think that the characters would react like this. DJ wouldn't be so happy to be in some kidnappers place just because there is internet/phone etc. and I'm more than positive Steph would tell Danny that DJ didn't come home, especially if Kimmy found her sweater on the ground but no sign of DJ. I'm also positive Stephanie and Kimmy would be way more upset. The story has potential but the character reactions need some work.

It's a really good story and all but you need to finish it and you also need to make the characters like maybe more scared that DJ has been kiddnapped

Oh, brilliant! Keep up your great writing!

hey that is really good so when are you going to finish it because i cant wait

Oh, I hope they can get DJ back safely! Keep up your awesome writing!

Brilliant and very dramatic; I love a good dose of suspense. Keep up your awesome writing!

This is an amazing story line keep it up. update soon

Wow, that's pretty cool! Keep up the fantastic work!

Brilliant...sort of. Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter. Try to keep up the good work!

Very nice; keep updating, and keep up the good work!

Very good so far. Just a couple things though. DJ's nickname is Deej, and Stephanie's name is Steph.

And I don't think Naruto was on in the 80's. It was started in 19 - just to let you know, though.

Other than that, great job! Can't wait for the next chapter!