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HopelessxRomanticx1993
2008-02-13 . chapter 1
You missed Lex, but he is kind of hard to write, isn't he. Hopeless out.
Kylaa
2008-02-03 . chapter 1
i've only recently started watching this show, but i'm hooked.
so i decided to check out some of the fanfiction for it.
i really like your word choice.
and i really like this fic. like a ton. i think i'm going to favorite it.
well done. i, like you, haven't seen the rescue episode either. so i thought it was perfect.
it's fine without lex, but i wonder how it would have felt for him.
this was really really good.
thank you.
:]
pinklover4
2008-01-17 . chapter 1
Hey, your story is really good! Everything fits each character so well! Awesomee!
iLOVEthis
2008-01-11 . chapter 1
I really liked this story. It was really well-written. I liked how you took simple everyday actions or objects that people take for granted and turned it into something more. Good job!
Sohmaboyfangirl
2008-01-11 . chapter 1
The Jackson part was HILLARIOUS! I would have guessed that from a guy! Keep up the good work!
a7xwriter888
2008-01-11 . chapter 1
hey wow this was actually really great. i lvoe how you managed to find out what you think everyone would be doing alothough i dont know if i would be thinking about jackson eating a burger but it was good. well great job and i cant wait to read more from you.
gabby611
pdyc
2008-01-11 . chapter 1
Awesome story!
watched 2 much tv
2008-01-11 . chapter 1
awesome
dramaqueenchris405
2008-01-11 . chapter 1
omg this was really good. I totally loved it, and i loved all the detail.

update soon!
JeNNiFER07
2008-01-10 . chapter 1
interesting fic! ahah. I like it :) You should write more! ahah
I am Brooklyn
2008-01-10 . chapter 1
i love this! i find it very funny, it seems so like them, erics had to be my favorite transition.
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