Illyana sure has a nasty tongue in this fanfic. I guess she recently used black magic and as a result became demonic in nature. I wonder how she would've turn out if only she never had her demonic half. Probably still living in Russia or something.
I don't know why I waited so long to read this, it's very good. I love the "silly hats" and maybe having Warlock become one. Their dilemma regarding Xi'an fit in as well. Keep it up.