I really like this fic. Much better than the actual episode. Maybe a sequel?
-Kate

what's up. your debut fic is good. i like it because you made this story stuck in past tense, which makes it better. you should have stuck your other stories similar to this past tense as well.

and about the past review of the First Sight Love i meant to type:

"...it's a bit awkward to read because it's all in PRESENT tense."

you know you could continue this its good

yo i thought you did a good job on this, i will give your other stuff a look over 2, if i could say one thing is keep doing the change ending thing i liked it, and for youf first story it was realy good, keep it up.

It's nice.

Hey lookie I found another one!:D
I thought I was going to go off to bed now too... But I thought I would see what else you have...
Ahem.
Anyways...I liked this new ending...Kigo!
I wish it was longer though...It seems like there could be a lot more...Like a whole possible story idea is going through my head now...hmm...*Shakes head* Sorry I got sidetracked for a second.
And as you said the conversation at the end between Shego and Mrs. Dr P... Kinda strange...I can't really see that...But as you said this is your first fanfiction...I say you've done well.
Oh...And as I mentioned in the review for your other one...If you need the help just let me know. :D
Now I am really off to bed...*Blinks* It is nearly 4 am!!
If I am lucky I will get at least 3 hrs sleep...4 if I am really lucky!

Becky Silver Black

cute story! wish u could sontinue it though

I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed this. I know how nerve-wrecking it can be publishing your first story and the torture you go through wondering if anyone will read, much less like it.

You're a very good writer from what I’ve seen so far, so don't ever doubt it again. Hope you get everything ironed out in your head for your other projects or you can simply do what I do, just write. The story usually sorts itself out along the way.

Word of advice, never underestimate the value of getting your story beta’d. I’ve finally learnt that lesson.

Anyway, that’s it for now. Keep up the good work. 