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| Anna Black 2008-02-28 ch 2, anon. | abuseExcellent prologue! |
| Anna Black 2008-02-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseDisclaimers should be at the top of the chapter. Its disappointing to decide to read a fan fiction story to only find out that so far theres only a disclaimer ( Disclaimers are still needed, I think.) Otherwise theres nothing wrong with it. I bet this will be a great story. Update Please. |
| LilyScorpius 2008-02-24 ch 6, | abuseI think it is EXTREMELY sweet so far! It’s great and Scorpius is a cutie! I love how you’ve made the Malfoy family behave!! Keep writing =) Hugs and cookies, ~LS |
| HPnLOTRrox 2008-02-04 ch 6, | abuseHm Lucius is planning something...he was all too quiet during dinner. I half expected him to say something snide towards her when they were leaving and he pulled her aside. But he probably didn't want to blow his cover. Can't wait for the next update. :) |
| PirateQueen716 2008-01-31 ch 4, | abuseI love this story! Hehe! |
| HPnLOTRrox 2008-01-28 ch 3, | abuseOhh, the plot thickens. :) I always felt that Lucius would be too proud and stubborn to let his old habits and prejudices go, plus he always seemed to desire power so much. I can't wait to see what happens next, update soon. :) |
| HPnLOTRrox 2008-01-28 ch 2, | abuseGood chapter, poor Scorpius, their family must be so imtimadting (sp?) I know I'd be if I had to go meet a family that big and close. |
| HPnLOTRrox 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abuseI love reading all the Lily/Scorpius stories I can find. :) It just doesn't seem to me that Rose and him would be together. Much too obvious, I think Rose would be to apt to follow the rules and would never end up with him. Looking forward to reading more. :) |
| AAMRNluver16 2008-01-25 ch 4, | abusesorru 2 disappoint u but HArry nd Ginny weren't married 'til Harry was 24 nd Ginny was 23. As for ron nd Hermione dey didn't get married 'til dey were both 26 |
| cph1609 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuseGnarly story! Keep it up. |