My favorite line is when Sora wishes silently that he could see Roxas. There is just so much meaning in those 5 words, that it changes the entire dynamic of the story; it's completely brilliant. I was skimming over all the reviews you got for this, and everyone is mentioning the introspective way you wrote for Sora, which makes me a little sad because they're surprised to see the real Sora, and not the hyper go-lucky one most people think he is, but more than that it makes me grateful for you for writing this amazing piece that shares more of Sora's true nature, not just the mask he wears as a hero.
And again I go back to that last thought; it's desperate and needy. Sora doesn't want to be home; there's still more he himself needs to do to feel satisifed, almost as if the keyblade may have finished with him, but it left him with so many unanswered questions that he needs to clear himself of. This sotry leaves so much to ponnder, and thank you so much for writing this amazing work.

Love,
crimson-obsidian-rose

Really liked this one:) You wrote Sora well, and I can see them doing that after they got back. Great one shot ^-^ God bless!

Many writers write sora as a happy-go-lucky and,yeah,dumb,,but you captured his deeper emotion without having to make him seems ooc,,luv it XD

Ah, poor Sora. That's...so sad! But so pretty.

Aw. I liked it. A little short for me, though. It seems like there's supposed to be more somehow. But it's okay the way it is. =]

It burns us...it burns us...the wonderfulness of it all burns us so!
Sora is Sora is Sora, unless he's in a fanfiction...unless he's in your fanfiction. Which is to say that most people write 'Sora' as a two dimensional happy-go-lucky, sugar high hero, with no impurities what-so-ever.
And then there's you.
You who can right serious!Sora and make him into a person and not just 'Sora.' That's why I love you so. x3

-Tanuki

beautiful!

you have a knack for writing Sora that I really don't see in many authors. Everyone makes him this bubbly, air-headed little boy, and I mean honestly, this is the guy who saved worlds! but yes, thank you once again for doing these characters justice =)

A free moment at last!! 8D

I share your sentiments, and adore the introspective side you've given Sora - here or even in Waiting. It still amazes me how in tune you are with these characters. Both Sora and Riku seem so grown up and independent in this piece - both in the good ways and in the way that means they have regrets. Well done! :) I thoroughly enjoyed reading it!

*speechless*

Very nice. :) I like all the little details you add in about how the town has changed since they left. Not to mention yay for Sora being introspective! You're right, the game did NOT show enough of that.

Aw...you wrote Sora wonderfully. All of your stories are really good, but for some reason, I like this more than many of your other stories. It's very sadly-sweet, and you did an awesome job. Can't think of anything else to say to describe how good this fic is, so I'll just end it now.

Wonderful job.

Wow. I don't normally get into Sora stories, mainly 'cause I love Roxas and his character so much more. But, like always, you manage to make a beautiful story out of this. I really liked it. I don't think there is a single story of yours that I've read that I haven't liked. So, just keep writing as much as you want, and I'll keep reading them and liking them. :D

This was sad, and really nostalgic. I love that it incorporates all of the characters without bashing anyone, the flow of the writing itself is very good and the concept itself is one I sometimes wish people played with more often.Not to mention the descriptions were pure eloquence Thank you for writing, it was a pleasure to read.

How many times are you going to come up with such a wonderful story that should deserve a million awards? I am addicted to your writing.
And as to your comment about writing from Sora's view, I think you did an okay job. It's not the best you've done, but with some practice you will be even more amazing than you already are, dear. Feed my addiction please, it craves more of your writing frequently. ^^

Your interpretations of these characters are always so ridiculously detailed and down to pat with Squeenix's plan it utterly AMAZES me. Not that this isn't anything I've already said before. You can keep any character in-character as you so command, and that shines beautifully in this piece. Not only that, your format in writing and the way you write lines to flow smoothly and gracefully from one to another is added pleasure to this read. And how you pulls bits and pieces from the game and incorporate them so /perfectly/ into your oneshots/stories will never be anything short from outstanding. Your writing really brings imagery to mind, and you describe things with such detail it paints a never-ending picture in my head. The whole story made me feel calm, yet anxious; happy, yet sad. A lot like how I felt when I actually beat the game and sat there for about twenty minutes just staring at the credits. (I was near tears haha) And as for Sora; you really manage to write him in a way that's not only 'simply Sora', but it's actually believable. You managed to pick away at his perpetual happiness and optimism and unearth a different side to him, a more solemn and introspective side. It's not an entirely new concept, however many have attempted to write serious!Sora and have failed miserably, practically writing the more angsty Roxas's disposition under Sora's name. But you? You write Sora as Sora. It's a feat that few can accomplish, given that they actually put forth the effort into actually keeping characters in character.

That having been said, you should write Squeenix's screenplays. You'd do a wonderful job.

(lol @ long review)