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| Ty 2008-09-20 ch 6, anon. | abuseI like it so far, the only problem i've found is that there are quite a lot of "movie-isms" Grr! Hehe Your a good writer with good ideas! Congrats :P |
| Taeniaea 2008-07-28 ch 26,  | abuseGreat Story!! |
| Secret world 2008-04-25 ch 6, | abuseloved it |
| PaigetheSuperWhitelighter 2008-03-05 ch 1, | abuseOMG Rah, I loved this chapter. What an very nice way to bring the reader straight into the mystery of the story. Especially with what is in the letter that Lily wrote to Severus. I can't wait for the other chapters. |
| mundi 2008-02-27 ch 26, | abuseWell who whould you know severus is irlynns father what a shock irlynn is going to have kittens when she learn that so update soon I want to know what is going to happen see ya. |
| mundi 2008-02-27 ch 25, | abuseI liked this chapter It is bad that harry can´t live whith his twin sister but there´s nothing they can do about it or maybe yes I don´t know we are going to wait for the sequel of this story so see ya soon I hope. |
| mundi 2008-02-27 ch 24, | abuseThis is getting better and better I hope that in the next chapter harry and irlynn discover the truth I hope that this rewiew is enough constructive for you see ya. |
| mundi 2008-02-27 ch 23, | abuseGood chapter keep writting I want more see ya. |
| mundi 2008-02-27 ch 22, | abuseGood chapter keep writting I want more see ya. |
| mundi 2008-02-26 ch 21, | abuseGood chapter keep writting I want more see ya. |
| mundi 2008-02-26 ch 19, | abuseGood chapter keep writting I want more see ya. |
| mundi 2008-02-26 ch 18, | abuseGood chapter keep writting I want more see ya. |
| mundi 2008-02-25 ch 17, | abuseGood chapter keep writting I want more see ya. |
| mundi 2008-02-21 ch 1, | abuseGood story keep writing I want more. |
| Darkwill0w 2008-02-10 ch 13, | abuseGood fanfic. Only things i have to say thats not good is that its very much alike the canon in everyway and when you have read as much fanfics as i it tends to get a bit boring when there is just a minimal change in the story.(this might just apply to me) And i dont know if you did it on purpose because there is a lack of intresting ppl to write about in ravenclaw ppl in harrys year or not but is Luna not the same age as ginny and not in harrys year ? Ofcourse its your fic and you can do whatever you like but because the rest of the fic is pretty much canon it make it werid. good luck with the fic and keep updating make it intresteing as i think it can be. //darkwill0w |