wow. the detail u put into this and the word choice truly fits in with the story. i must say that i love it

well done and very smexy.

~sniff~ ~sniff~
Thas was beautiful!! ~wipes away a tear~
lol. dramatic...
Anyways that was very beautiful, good job!!
=D

bravo nice short story...more please =)

Not bad, very sweet.

Wow..all i can say..this was amazingly written, and full of emotion

I loved it, keep it going.






~H.k~

Very sweet and dripping with subtle emotion. Well done!

This is beautiful!! Characters are so well writen... I love Leon in your story. Am waiting for the next chapter.
Bye,
SeeYouAround

Aw, that was so sweet! You really did the characters good!
Great job!
A.K.

That was really sweet. :)