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| Bishop T 2008-01-12 ch 7, | abuseClifhanger! It is going to be very hard to wait for the next chapter. I have really enjoyed this story so far. There is nothing like suspense to keep you on the heart stopping edge of your seat. Weel done! |
| Bishop T 2008-01-12 ch 6, | abuseOh no! |
| Bishop T 2008-01-12 ch 4, | abuseThis is starting to get very intense. Dang! Who are these creeps? |
| Bishop T 2008-01-12 ch 3, | abuseWhoah! Leslie's forboding was right! I hope no one gets killed or hurt! |
| Bishop T 2008-01-12 ch 2, | abuseI don't blame Leslie for feeling uneasy. Being a celebrity can be dangerous, not only for Leslie and Christian, but for their children too. Roark and Leslie are right to take the forboding seriously. It is very wise to take precausions and Roark gave her great advise. Hologrammed invitations! Brilliant! |
| Bishop T 2008-01-12 ch 1, | abuseGoodness! Getting their titles back is both a blessing and a curse. Having the news hounds on your trail can be very tiresome and annoying. They won't have as much privacy as they used to. It is going to be interesting to see what developes in your story. |
| PDXWiz 2008-01-11 ch 7, | abuseOh boy, utter chaos..glad they stopped two of the bad guys. Now about the white-clad figure... Yes, take comfort in the happy ending! Oh boy, we'll be having more problems from those troublemakers...argh! LOL at Carlono...he's pretty cool. Yah! Token appearance by Errico and Michiko... and yes! You shoehorned the Duke in as well! Yippee! Yup, the Duke does need to pay a visit to 'that lovely island' Christian and Leslie live on, for 'professional assistance' to help him find someone. lol Groan...we have to wait longer to find out what happens next? Oh well... great story! Enjoyed it a lot... Gordon |
| PDXWiz 2008-01-11 ch 6, | abuseOMG, are you trying to kill off the entire royal family and make Christian the king? Say it ain't so! I love the family, even Magga! Hooray, the Duke will appear! That is excellent news, thanks! :) Hooray, Errico and Michiko will appear! Also groovy news! Ooh, that could be interesting. The Duke coming to FI as a guest to seek out love...great fantasy: real royalty seeks love! Yeah, I know, been there, done that, but it's still pretty cool... Yeah, Anna-Laura is right, it is a reward. Like a knighting... Yah! Princess Leslie rocks! ACK! Cliffhanger! ACK! ACK! ACK! Gordon, hurriedly jumping to chapter 7... |
| PDXWiz 2008-01-11 ch 5, | abuseI don't know if I've heard of Christian Lacroix, either, but at least I know Yves Saint Laurent. Hmm, wish I could get some clothes from Ellstrom Brothers. LOL I think it would be cool for the portrait of Christian and Leslie and the triplets to appear on all of those commemorative things. Luckily for the annoyed Christian, he won't have to see them unless they somehow turn up in Fantasy Island (for example, if Leslie or Ingrid take some back, or if Leslie's friends order some via the Internet...hint hint lol) I think Leslie is Christian's lucky star! :) LOL at Briella not going to give up her throne... I liked the joke about Christian getting the tiara Kristina wore when Arnulf II became king. Cool. Susannah's discovered her hands :) how sweet! Hehehehe...I like the idea of Roarke using Spanish with the triplets so that they grow up bilingual... Nice to make the pins for everyone in the family. Okay, I guess the ceremony will happen in the next chapter... Gordon |
| PDXWiz 2008-01-11 ch 4, | abuseOkay, time for a ribbon-cutting ceremony... I've heard of Brooks Brothers, and boy do I think Christian would cut quite the dashing figure in one of their suits, but I've never heard of Carolina Herrera. Hooray! Anna-Kristina is here! So Natalia will be as well. Oh boy! Excitement. I hope Leslie does good with her lines! Good, she can pick up a word or two, so it helps her relax a bit. Omigosh! I love her unscripted line! HAHAHAHAHA! Yup, as I thought, the press loves the triplets... can't get their fill of them! :) Good, her work really paid off at learning jordiska. I think she made Christian really proud of her. Hehehehe, I love how their kissing each other is so full of love, they just completely zone out... O o o o o o...another tv appearance for the trips? She's been gone almost five hours...hm, that could be Teppo's mom, or Ingela...wonder who it will be? And what's going to happen? Omigosh! I think it really is Teppo's mom! She's beyond psychotic! 'she always claimed to have a feeling'... But wait...I don't know who little sister could be. Well, I don't think it's Ingela, because she has enough money to pull this off without worrying about money. However, Teppo's mom certainly isn't rich and could definitely have the money woes... Gordon |
| PDXWiz 2008-01-11 ch 3, | abuseWoohoo! Six babies/toddlers will mean twice the usual fun with the triplets! :) Oh boy, all the women are going shopping with Leslie and the trips...what a security nightmare that will be! Oh good, Roald has done his military training. I'm glad things are obviously going better for him. More evidence that Christian's family is very loving and has a great sense of humor. All that banter about the dress uniforms and fancy clothes... Oh, okay, good, Mateo won't have to suffer through the ceremony in person. Uhoh, why is Magga wanting to move out? I wonder how Anna-Kristina will react to Christian having her old room. Oh boy, the troublemakers have been working on this for a long time... I wonder if the Count is behind this. Or perhaps someone who doesn't like the Liljefors clan. And Ingela still is probably boiling over as well... Or maybe the crazy mother of Leslie's first husband... Gordon, ready to jump into the next chapter... |
| PDXWiz 2008-01-11 ch 2, | abuseWell, we'll see how it goes. Briella has done it again. Ya know what, she's making a mahvelous queen! Leslie might get to enjoy some of the ribbon-cutting ceremonies. Especially when Lilla Jordso formally establishes a consulate and an embassy on Fantasy Island... or at least when Christian opens up a branch on Arcolos. Well, at least the whole thing is a good excuse to drag Anna-Kristina back into the storyline ;) I wonder how Mateo will handle all of this. He's such a humble guy. She's doing the right thing contacting Roarke about this weird feeling that came over her. Good advice from him; I hope the family takes it well and is helpful. Hm, troublemakers again. What are they up to? Lots of creating a stir today. I think the crown and the re-ennobling of Christian will dominate the local press for a few days unless the troublemakers are successful in whatever nefarious plot you've got cooked up for them... Fancy hologram invites? Very cool! Good, at least the family is more than willing to heed Leslie's warning. On to the next chapter! Gordon |
| PDXWiz 2008-01-11 ch 1, | abuseGrand Savior of the Original Royal Crown...LOL! Yeah, I could see that the press would anoint him with that title... Leslie's right; Christian's a prince at heart and always will be. She'll accept being a princess, I expect...besides, Prince Tobias has a nice ring to it :) I think Lilla Jordso will eat up the fact that both daughters have Enstad family names as well as Toby... He's right; today's press is bloodthirsty, even in a mild-mannered nation such as Lilla Jordso. Oh ho! So Anna-Kristina is STILL a princess, legally? Clever twist, that... And yes, Leslie HAS to endure yet another pompous ritual...Christian has to deal with the press, Leslie with the pomp...oh joy... Hmm, something is afoot... Gordon |
| jtbwriter 2008-01-11 ch 7, | abuseOh-this is one frightening story! And the threat isn't over yet? Who is this mysterious woman, who hates Leslie so? What is she going to do? And what did the others attempt to achieve by killing Leslie or the family? You really gave us a spellbinding tale-thankfully Leslie's "feelings" saved them this time...will she be able to prevent another attack? Thanks for the sweetness of Christian's belief in her, and how the family cherishes the children..I hope they aren't going to be the instrument of these monsters revenge! Is the Duke or his son going to be the catalyst of the plot? Thanks for another "fantastic" story-and for the promise of more! |
| Harry2 2008-01-10 ch 7, | abuseSo, maybe the target WAS NOT Leslie, but some other member of the Royal Family. Whoever they are after, and its definetly more than just three or four, has a serious grudge that they are NOT going to give up on. |